Decent take on the classic :)
nice reading the bits from Tawna's point of view.

Read all the chapters. It was great. Great detail. Great action sequences. Great piece of work.

Hey uh, if you ever look back on your reviews, don't listen to my last two here. I was a big stickler at the time. :/ This story was exceptional and I loved every bit of it to pieces. Sorry I was a bit of a jackass then.

-CF97-

Whoa!

Awsome!I luv it!Yay!Crash and Tawna are together again!But not for long if you know what I mean!XD And yes this is Chihuahua rocks from just to let you know!

Okay sorry about that. I'm going to finish this incredibly long review with a few of Crash's greatest quotes:

"Open, da[rn] you!"

"This-sucks!"

"Bless you, sir. Your deed is met with gratitude." That quote was my favorite. So, great story! And there was barely a single mistake in grammar and spelling!I hate stories that seem to speak jibberish and you can't even visualize it. HATE IT! Can't wait to see the other stories you've written!

3 Chicflick

P.S. Quick question over the Touche. When I put something like that it usually says:

é

Now that is either some retarded code or it is an (e).

Stupid DSi... It gives you a choice of letters that you can't even use! Oh well. Bye now! .o ;)

Wow! What a great story! I kinda figured you pictured this whole thing with the 2002 Crash Bandicoot, but it didn't happen in my mind. I saw it as the Crash in "Crash Bandicoot:Mind Over Mutant". That worked for me. The whole thing was entirely vivid in my overactive imagination. But then again, don't most people who have accounts her like that?

I admired Crash's stuck-up, I-can-do-anything-and-look-like-a-total-champ attitudes, because they were really funny. If you've seen the clip art for the newer Crash, and reread the chapter of when he is on the second island traveling through the jungle, you'll see it.

Now there was some parts I had skipped. I started on chapter 5 and finished it without reading the Tawna Interludes. Sorry about that. I like to stick with the main character story.

Ther were some certain parts that I took no interest in was some of Crash's cursing. Only certain parts, because some of it was just awesome. Like when he was trying open the doors before the fire reached him.

Okay, now I realize that this is getting really long and to top of my review with some of the great quotes:

Hang on, I gotta look something up...

*Please hold(elevator music playing in the background)

You know, I Really like this story.

In fact, it's one of the few I am willing to re-read many times over! :D Liek I'm doing right now!

A perfect ending to a perfect story. Excelent job!

O_O' Poor Crash... I always did hate that bridge...

Yeah, Crash... Never wanna see that crazy kanga aand tnt ever again... Not all wishes come true... Good ol', Ripper Roo. Gotta love him.

The story is great so far. I love how you put the levels into

a story form with such ease of writing.

Great chapter! Nothing like a classic Crash story. I laughed so hard that you added the "uh-oh" from the cutscene out of the first Crash game, it really added to the effect.

Honestly, one of the best stories I've ever read. Please keep going with your stories.

Hahah, I like how Crash is all awkward like yeah...Great read, thanks for it!

-GCOE

XD Cowlick. It looks good on you, Crash! No worries. Headhunters. Aren't they just the life at parties?

-GCOE