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Uh..huh...okay then. I think. Im confused...who was it? ,

I reaaaaaaaaaaalllly Liked this. It's f-ing awesome I must say. I really love your writing style for all of your stories. This one especially, it's pretty boss.

I loved this! I'm guessing the italicized parts are what happens in the future since Lust promised Pride (and vice versa) not to do something so stupid again? Anyway, I thought this was really lovely. :)

OMG, I had tears in my eyes as I read this, it is so romantic! I hope you'll continue this story, or write an Itachi X OC story :)

So... let me see if I have this right.

Hunter-Nins (or Sasuke) are hunting down Itachi and a civilian from Konoha whom he has been...seeing? Intersting premis and fantastic exacution, highly entertaining with a very fitting writting style.

However, I wish you'd specified who exactly was chasing them. 'Cuz I KNOW (seriously, I can tell you the manga pages to look at) Sasuke could never beet Itachi in a fight, infact the only person who could've is probably Tobi/Mandara... And due to he sadistic nature one would assume that he'd just use "Lust" as a sort of barganing chip type thingy.

oh...my...GAWD! you should build a story around this... going by what you've written about Gaara from SecretKeeper to QuickSand. i am a faithful one. . you're good. utilize it. mucho lurv.

Obi

I REALLY liked that! Though i had to read it twice to understand _

YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY

i understod :3

i think it was pretty cool. i didn't understand the italized things. when did they happen?

ok

random question

who were pride and lust?

i think it was absolutely brilliant

though i didnt quite get the italics bits

but there we go

i dont think it was quite meant to be understood

its good though

bye!

aww how sweet

You know, I quite like this. It has a nice tone to it, and I like how you don't really say who Pride is. (Or Lust, for that matter, but she's an OC ((right?)), so..) Again, really nice tone. It has a nice sort of feeling to it, you know, a loose sort of forbidden love. I don't quite know how to describe this. Your style really shows here and it seems really well-written. Great job!

Shque Well done well done! Me love Me love! p You should write a sequel. Or at least describe the OC so I can draw fanart!1

It's an OC and Itachi, right? Huh? Huh? Well, in any event, I love, love, LOVED this!

this was really interesting, and i almost caught the drift of the one shot but...WHA? it's still a bit confusing. For example, what happened? was it really meant to be that vague? i understand they fell in love with each other, but i don't understand what happened to cause the promise and what happened to break it. but anyways, very interesting. i liked it.