I don't understand why when there is a female character she has to hide her gender.

Wow thank you author this fanfic interesting and good sorry i wanna write many commed but my english is not very good

I did not expect ohshc like characters, I was prepared for drama not humor and lightheartedness, not that it's a bad thing

I love the Cinderella chapter. i think it was one of the best scene in this story.

Uh squeeze me, you better watch who you call weak you fucker! That’s my sweet defensive cinnamon roll and if you HURT my cinnamon roll in any way, I will make Hell look like the safest place in Heaven. JUST TRY ME! *glares at Sakaki A-hole* ...I think I’m a just a bit too attached to Ryoma... *grins weakly*

Although the grammar mistakes were very distracting, I really enjoyed this story. It was a good break from the more intensely written fanfics here hehe

I love the part where Nanjiroh, Ryoga, and Karupin have their little meeting. I can see it clearly in my head, the three of them sitting in a circle and the cat fully acting as a participant in the conversation. It was adorable.

Ryoma: I... Look like a girl! *horrified*
Me: well she IS girl

Wait they didn't have her size in female but male?

I was like 'Wat the frek?' Is happening hahahhaha XD

Fantastic!~~~~

Do yanagi renji lemon please

Phew,that took me three days to finish...
But,of course,I don't mind it,
Like seriously,I LOVE THIS STORY!
You my dear author,
Is ONE AMAZING WRITER!*salute*
I mean,the FLOW,OHMIGOD!
It was just soooo BEAUTIFUL3
And trust me when I say you're amazing,'coz you are
Not just ANY AUTHOR can make me turn panda eyed('coz I cried too much) and yet still make me like the story too much to feel tired/bored/too deppressed
and whatsoever...
I mean,this story IS LONG,like SUPER LONG!
It's the LONGEST fanfic I've read so far THAT I ACTUALLY STICK AROUND to read EVERY ONE of it's chapter (I tend to skip some of the chapters when it comes to long fanfic-blame that on my family 'coz they ALWAYS take the laptop away from me when it comes to the good part that I just have to skip the not too interesting ones so I won't lose it if they take the laptop away)
BUT,this story-no,you,the writer of this story make the story INTERESTING enough and control the flow of the story so nicely that I can't help but be sooo excited and keep me on edge for the next scene*big grin*
OH GOD,HOW I MISS THAT FEELING OF PURE EXCITEMENT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
And let me tell you,this is the first time I ever write a review on the phone,THE PHONE for goodness sake!
'coz I couldn't wait for tomorrow to review this story and tell you how you have save me from the pit of boredom!
Now,let me tell you what I think on the plot of the story
Now,you know that most fanfic are written with a specific genre as the theme right?
But, yours,it doesn't just center around one genre and THAT my dear Plush,is what makes YOUR STORY AWESOME!
Now,to be more precise,I don't think there is anything wrong with not putting much love scene for Fuji and Ryoma from the start and instead let the plot flow slowly,but fact,it just make the last few chapters more enjoyable3
You know what,I think I should go now or my dad will kill me!
I'll PM yoj later,bye

Its a GREAT romantic fanfiction story I read...Squeal!
I can't get over with every chapters with romance hehehehe...
I love it...

I bet this would be easier I could remember anything about PoT