It was beautiful, even if I don't quite know what happened. Who was the father? Who was the father the second time?

Good work!

I liked it. Actually, oddly enough, I almost liked your A/N at the end as much as the fic. Obviously the message was good, but it also felt very poetic - not purposefully so, but I'm guessing you're one of those people that infuses poetry into everything. The fic itself made sense and didn't, if that makes sense, but it felt more like an organized chaos, which is real life, so it works. Great job!

Bittersweet again. You've got that down. I know you saw this as more just angst, but I saw a faint sweetness. A silver lining if you will.

One day this really will happen. He'll look back and see what he threw away because of his revenge. And part of me hopes it will burn. Part of me hopes he'll get his happy ending.

Saying that I loved this sounds so cliched.

But, I do love it.

Katie.

A few errors throughout, but all in all, just wonderful. It wasn't that OOC; sure, it might have been a little bit, but not enough to really harp on you for. The first paragraph of the author's note...

Well. ALL of the author's note, really...

I get it. -shrugs- Nothing else to say. I get it.

And it wasn't angsty in a bad way. It was quite pretty.

...er... I was supposed to be reading the OTHER story... -nervous laugh- I'll get to that too. I just saw a few interesting pieces and decided to check them out first (-procrastinator-).

Your summary for the GaaSaku, however... that hit me. It really did. Hit me so hard I put it in my profile. I might get around to reading that. -nervous laugh #2-

i thought it was really good

but who was sakuras babys father?

I didn't understand it but ok. It was good

that was great :D i loved it

you are very talented _

it's not really that OOC. it was kinda good actually but i'm dying to know who the father is. and it really is a pity that Suki died. but it's just another blessing in disguise that Sakura and Sasuke get to start anew right? hehe, i love that couple so much!

T.T that was sad. i dont want to go to bed sad...

It's nice.

(The state of mind Sasuke SHOULD have been after killing his brother is this.)

You have a nice flow with the story, showing how Sasuke slowly gets adjusted to his life again and the ending is just...amazing.

The circle of life.

The anonymous-ness of Suki's father, as well as how you had her just die added to the story, making it interesting.

I don't see why many would not like it.

*KUMA HUG*

(You seem like you need one)