krillin smirking at his wife eighteen i am your guardian angel

Ooful fic mate

A car crash wouldn’t kill krillin

Well, it was a decent story. I know a couple characters didn't get treated as nicely as they could have been but it was nothing major. The ending was also a little abrupt. I liked that Vegeta, 17, and even Hercule went to the funeral.

One thing really didn't make sense to me though. How could he die and she be out in the hospital from a car crash of all things? I know normal people would have that happen to them, but we literally saw 18 stick her bare arm out and chop a police car in half.

Anyway it was still a nice story.

WHY?! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE SUCH A SAD STORY, IT'S NOT FAIR! X',',( it was still good though...can't wait to read more from you ! Now if you'll excuse me I need to blow my nose, and read one of your happier story's...

this story made me cry! But it was good! very nice

Again, I don't like sad endings, but this is a good one. Also, Krillin DID die in GT, but Shenron did allow one last wish before he removed the Dragon Balls, albiet temporarily, and Goku used that wish to bring Krillin back, much to 18 and Marron's delight! Cool, huh?

ive said this before about your writing and ill sure as hell say it again..I wish i could marry your writing ):

(sobs)*sniff*sniff*(sob,sob)This was so..*sniff*sniff(sob)so..(sob)sad...Everytime I read this fic it actually makes me cry...That means that this fic is very well written...Keep up all the great work..

I think that was a really good story beause you can't always have storys where everyones over the moon! I liked the whole story but I think maybe a few other people should have talked before 18 made her finally speach but besides that it was really good!

*Wipes tears away* Beuatiful. I usually don't read death fics, but I read this anyway. I really was close to tears, this was so sad! (That, and I was listening to 'Emotions' by Destiny's Child)

That was a long one shot fic. The way you portrayed the characters were great and although this was a very, very angsty fic, I still enjoyed it. Are you going to write about what'll happen after the funeral and how the two blondes will cope with their new life? Well, I believe you are definitely the first author who has written a very long, long story. Good job on the fic!

i've only read half but its realy sad. i would hate to be bulma cause it'd be horrible being named after underware. briefs ha ha ha thats funny

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that's so sweet! ur really good writing fics aboukt 18 & krillin, *sniff sniff* u really got ther attitudes well! an inspiration 2 us all!

(sobing in the backround) Im sorry (sniff, Snif) but first Tara Leaves willow and now...KRILLINS DEAD! WHAA WHAAA. I cant get away from good sad storys!