Been a while since I've read on this story and I must say that I've enjoyed catching up to what you've written so far. I see where you've tied her actions into the 2nd game. I'm very impressed!

I found some time to come on my laptop and read the rest, and I hope you're writing some more chapters, aren't you? I hope so because actually love this story, and is a great idea and told with brilliant writing skills. Thank you for entertaining me so far and I hope to see more!

I am definitely going to carry on reading your story. I love it! You use brilliant vocabulary and a good plot to each character. Although, I hope to see more on Thomas's story, I don't feel he's much of a character but just someone whose 'there', and is interested in see more of him.

I really do like this story and will continue to read it, but I feel that chapter 6 could include more description of her eyes. Anyways, ima carry on reading.

Its funny, no one in the game (agest delta) seems to relize that he is only trying to do what he was created for!

Cool story

Oh boy.

Looking foreward to seeing more of what you have planned for Rosy :)

Will she meet Eleanor eye-to-eye, I wonder...

I wonder many things.

Surprise me, please.

Thanks for taking the time to write :)

As the one before me said, top notch writing.

Fun read.

Things are getting very interesting. Don't have any constructive criticism for your writing, it looks top-notch to me.

Enjoying your story so far, keep up the good work. I've played BS1 and I'm hoping to get BS2 for christmas this year, this is the perfect bridging story.

Rather than "Howl", wouldn't "Shriek" be a more fitting name for the chapter?

Anyway, two good chapters, and coming like pearls in a row :)

Thanks for updating.

PS: I hope we see Rosy start to explore the full potential of her telekinesis in the near future.

I guess the next chapter introduces the bis sisters?

Anyway, thanks for updating :)

This is great so far! All your OC's have their own distinct personalities. Please continue!

Good story you should continue this.

Oh shi-! A Little Sister, someone that has an unlimited supply of slowly regenerating ADAM, using a plasmid? Great. I don't think the splicers of Rapture are going to be happy with that development...