Oh god You used that scene from when Stewie was born?

Nice quick story.

J'adore j'aurais voulu voir dautres en vie mais je sais que sakura est morte et badore lomakd.

trash just another redemption fic

What about konan what happened to her

Great revenge fic. I do feel bad for tsunade, gai, lee, and hinata kinda, the first 3 were true friends to naruto. Hinata was nice, she didn't act to help much but she was nice. Shika and chouji kinda, kiba just looked down at him, kakashi well you crushed him. Also great description. I can take mutilated bodies, but damn this made my stomach queasy, that or it was the pork ramen I ate. Too many naruto fanficsramen addiction. Also, yeah, I hate jiraiya, couldn't he have sent money, a disguised shadow clone for a visit, a fucking letter, something for his godson. Even if he cant be there physically due to his spy network (which I doubt he takes seriously. Im sure he spends more time molesting women) there was so much he could have done for naruto. He didn't teach him shit, naruto is a damn genius for progressing so far with so little help in the rasengan or summoning. Seriously, throwing him off a fucking cliff, to access dangerous chakra that could overwhelm him? Fucking idiot.

Okay, I loved the Omake of the Simpsons Halloween Special. I lost it the first time I saw Ned Flanders as the devil and I still find it funny as hell.

Then there is the age of the characters, remember naruto, sasuke and stuff are only 14-15.. So if the diyamo publicly shames the entire clan and decries sasuke personally, he's got decades or even half-a century that will follow him... If he's not killed, that's more then enough time for his entire clan to be hated, his name to be used as a curse-word, and his "elite" status be totally laughed at! Everything he knows to be gone and nobody even think of it.

Wait, if the diyamo already ordered sasuke's punishment why do you have him ordering the exact same punishment in the next chapter? Shouldn't it already been done? And why are all these "shinobi" turning over their power to a bunch of civilians when they could kill them when they were still in diapers? How does that make sense? And if sasuke was getting all that (sealed..etc) then what exactly was the point of bring itachi to the leaf? He's already: shamed, humiliated, crippled, denied the m.s. (which you for some reason give him), had his dreams destroyed and his reason for existing taken.. I fail to see how much more then just killing him can this point, it's kinda a blessing isn't it?

The uchiha are like a cancer.. You don't cut part of it out and hope for a remission... You cut it all out, like any possible "flare-ups" otherwise your not "cured".. You "obliterate" any "diseased" cell regardless of past crimes.

And yet it wasn't madara, just another uchiha.. Thus why I say, kill them ALL.. after all in another generation or two, what's to stop history from repeating itself? Better get rid of the entire bloodline.. Just kill them all.. for the greater good of course.

While I like this end, It tends to make me wonder, why didn't naruto just do this from the start when he got his powers? Why fight anyone? Just one big "woosh" and everyone's dead?.. I mean it seems like it would be that easy...So what's the point?

I just don't get it, barring the whole "hidden prince" trope that is used a lot in these stories (granted in those the person wanting to hide the prince sends them far away from where they grew up) the entire premise doesn't make much sense, the village can't change that much in just 12 years.. It's kinda impossible... Especially not with a living/breathing reminder in their faces the whole time.. It's just impossible. either the stories of minato/kushina and etc. are wrong, or authors need to get a new Schick.

the third's wife couldn't possibly be killed by the kyuubi, her corpse had knife wounds (or something) the uchiha had to kill her first... The "friends of minato" would have obeyed his rules first the third's second... Why would they turn naruto against them after he learned?.. Doesn't that kinda defeat the purpose? Tsunade never cared for the village or the people at all, which is kinda the reason she's gone for so long, so wouldn't she care more about naruto then any of them?... Nobody cared about the sharringan, danzo himself sent sai as an assassin.. And nobody of the rookie cared if he was brought back or killed! Tsunade being as physically powerful as she is and as stubborn as she is, do you think she would have caved to a bunch of civilians? She's have splattered them all over the room!

This story has a few glaring holes. Sauske in order to avenge his clan's slaughter, devotes his entire life (no friends, no personality, no mentality, no nothing) to killing his brother.. He is told by some people he cares nothing for that they were actually the reason his family is all dead, and he's been a pawn to everyone he considers weaker then him, but these "weaker" ones tricked his brother into working for them, but it's ok because he can somehow get more power that they can't give? And also he has to work for them too?..Ummm.. How does that make sense?

I'm not sure of why you have such a drive to kill orochimaru, you realize he lasts till boruo.. and all things considered he's not a threat, He's kinda pathetic in the last part of part one and really a stupid antagonist in shippuden, he really doesn't matter, other then he's like the lesser of evils to allow in the world. He's no great "snake" or "dragon" he's a "white worm" like my grandfather used to use as bait to catch fish, he's really not that dangerous or intimating. He's terrified of death more then anything else, he's interested in learning jutsu, staying alive, being young and little boys...He can be bullied very easily into letting the powers that be, alone..Just to stay alive! It's kinda stupid to think he's a threat considering everybody can easily kill him later in the story. He has no power base, no allies, no way of getting close, he's just pathetic. Seal up his chakra alone and he can't switch bodies then he's screwed! Make sure nobody willingly submits, and he's screwed again! He's really not a threat except to small, unprotected children of the male persuasion!