hooo cielos cuanto sufrimiento

pobrecito que rayos le está pasando hooo que crueldad

si sagrado jaja pobre fue dura la prueba pero no estuvo solo

si po es como la representación del bien ya saben un guerrero que esta por ensima del bien y el mal al menos a mi me parece asi

guauuu fue genial y ame ese abrazo y esa línea de sagrado

hey eso si se puso desconsertante y caray si que se ve el respeto de tigresa a po

ho vaya esto si se pone misteriososisismo

one word awsome

You really have talent. I liked your first story more but from an objective viewpoint they both are excellent. You have great ideas and write quite well.

OK, i've read a lot of stories on here, but this is the best by far! You're great at describing and storytelling. I love it. LOL, and you got me hooked on the song Viva La Vida by coldplay! Ha!

OK, I demand a sequel!

Hayley Jonas-Cullen

What can I say? This is the greatest story ever read! You should check out mine! They're awesome, too.

LOVED IT! It was awesome!

Holy cr...

I think I made a sequel to not even written story.

Godlike. Keep going that way!

Dude, I loved this story, hope you write more like this.

Spyro-N-KungFuPandafan

I get back from school today, check fanfiction, and what do I find? That you've already finished the story! So sorry I didn't comment on the second chapter, but you know I love the story and you, right? And you put in the soundtrack? And said all those nice things about me? Gosh, I'm blushing so hard right now, you have no idea!

On a side note, something awesome happened today. Guess what it was?

I joined the Gay/Straight Alliance in my school! I was so happy when I did, I'm currently doing the happy dance!

Love you to the marrow cells,

PEoaS