That's sad... yeah, they could be around the same age... Don't know why Trixie turned into Bella... but it's sad... :(

Hmm, interesting idea. I've seen this done a couple of times before - Bella and Molly as best mates thing - but I think I like your version the best.

The thought of Bella being called "Trixie" is a bit disconcerting but it makes a wonderful distinction between Molly's best friend and the monster who became a mass murderess.

Well done.

An intresting concept, but I found Bellatrix's voice rather un-canon-y. Or maybe because we've never seen her not completely loopy.

LD x

It's plausible for the two of them to had been friends at one point, since they're cousins. I think the story itself is bittersweet in a way.

Written very well, in any case. Good job. ;)

OH, very interesting. I'd never thought of the possibility of Bella and Molly having once been friends. The parallele points of view work well.

This is certainly original! And very well written.

Very good. Great beginning. Please continue

This is fantastic, well worth thinking about. Unusual circumstaces, but somehow I can see it. I love your style of prose. Excellent.