Great work!

even if i hate sad ends ;)

just so happy that Linds gets pregnant with Dannys kid! xD

But can you please make another D/L fic?

since i totaly loved this one!

and im totaly addicted to D/L specially after season 4!

And here in Norway they dont start with season 5 in a year at least! :S

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Great story, you wrote DL as the focus very well, and I was feeling sorry for both of them by the end. I liked especially how you wrote Lindsay's thoughts that 'she got played like a cheap piano, and how the scientict in her kept fixing on random scientific facts instead of letting her think properly. I also liked 'Home. She was safe to her own thoughts there. No Danny. No hurt. That was what she would have liked to believe, but she knew that it was foolish to think so', that was a very poignant line.

Poor Danny, too, realising what he's done, 'That he had cheated her, lied to her, denied her existence. For what? Comfort sex? Something that didn’t even last. Rikki was gone. And Lindsay might as well have been'. The song lyrics fit in very well with the last section, very sad ending, although not undeserved. I'm looking forward to your next story! :D

That was soo good! Sad too... And I loved how you used Take A Boww.. .that's one my favourite songs.. But the last line was really good and sad!

How much longer 'til Season 5...?

This was a good piece, and very realistic. I enjoyed it a lot.

Wow that was awesome! I really liked it! Intense! IS there gonna be more? Or is this just a one shot?

Whoah, almost missed this! I had no alerts! I loved it! I like DL (not as much as a certain other pairing, but I still like them ;) And as always I really loved your writing, and I think you got the characters perfectly. the song was a great choice, I have to say, and you worked it in very poignantly. You made me feel sorry for both Lindsay and Danny, but in different ways. I think you got Lindsay's feelings down exactly with these thoughts, 'She had fallen for his boyish looks, his bad boy personality, his devilish grin, and his Messer charm. And now she had to face the consequences of that.'

I loved her tough talking though at the end, calling Danny out on his behaviour, and having the courage to say what she did, although that makes me very sad. Very powerful last line.

Wow, loved all the bits about Lindsay thinking about Danny as the NYPD player, and how she'd been played like a 'cheap piano' very painful, and very honest of her.

And Danny too realises what he has done, and all that Rikki has been and not been to him, and how Lindsay has moved physically away from him, even at lunch. This was very powerful, you wrote their emotions and feelings superbly.

Great writing as always. More soon please!

this is really good. i think i would really like it if they could fix things, but it would be really hard and i think that this is probably what WOULD happen.

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I really liked it. Good job, I particularly liked the beginning, the words re-used in a different context, look and heart. And that Lindsay might as well have been gone. And her scientist mind. Really liked Joey, being so nice and understanding that she doesn't really need the beer anymore. Glad that she did talk although she had not wanted to. Her thoughts on what it means what he has done to her, and what he really is sorry for were very good too.