DAMN PLOT TWIST

cute little story!

Holy shit

Whaaa

They're all sex tho...no real convos?

She better email mike or something Lol

Falling...

Whoa

They need to talk. UST is gonna kill em

She was in daisy dukes and a tank in winter...in washington lol. Gotta let E see some skin, huh

I know this story has been up for a while, and I actually liked it but the one problem I have happens to be on this page. While there are different ways to interpreted songs I truly think you have widely misinterpreted Hallelujah by Rufus Wainwright. This is not a love song this is about the pain of first love and learning how to deal with a broken heart. This is hinted at with the line "Maybe there's a god above and all i ever learned from love was how to shoot at someone who outdrew you its not a cry you can hear at night its not somebody who's seen the light its a cold and its a broken hallelujah" This is not the only line that proves this song is not a love but it makes it deafeningly obvious that this song doesn't fit in with your story.

This IS SO AMAZING

Your story is wonderful, but I cannot believe that review. I have heard other fanfic authors say how horrible some reviewers can be but they've never posted one I could see. If people have a problem with someone's story, why do the read it? Much less take the time to write a horribly mean review. I'll tell you why, because the are all dickheads and their asshole must be jealous of all the shit that pours out of their mouth. Haters gonna hate:) Thanks for taking the time to write this wonderful lemon filled story and brightening my very stressful day!

I love this Story ,there fucking awful .

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