I read the re-write of this story by a different author and have noticed starting with this chapter the new version is completely different. I still don't get why Dobby is at Hogwarts when he is a Malfoy house elf. Does this chapter start after school start back up.

severus addicted your stories r cool

when are they gonne annoucne the wedding?!

omg now dumbledores harrys grampa

harry loses

no way dude

I have no idea what to say, but i really don't want to be turned into a map so here I am!

I dont know why but I started looking for a story just like that and I kind of like it. A lot of things dont really add up but I enjoyed it anyway. Im not a fan of the "inner monologs" especially the way Harry was questioning his worth. I think in the second part he was already way more confident. Also I thing Dumbledore would not have told them at the same time, but rather Snape first… And that sentence where they talked about the sex felt a little off too… Nevertheless I really enjoyed reading that piece so thank you :) Kind regards from Germany!

Boy, does Harry have a mouth on him! Fitting, I think.

HARRY

I would go to the Prime Minister and tell them everything and have them remove The Prime Minister. Plus I would also The the Prime Minister and the Queen about the Witch Hunter and because of what they do I would have the Queen put out an order of Shoot to Kill all Witch/Magic Hunters. Because this Would be an exicution Order.

Plus you wrote that Flashback Story order you Use Bellatrix Married Surname instead of her Maiden Name of Black. Because they were not married yet. So it would be Miss Black not Mrs. Lestrange. Do you might want to go back and Correct that part of the Story.

Plus you need to have the Dursleys sent to Prison Plus from what was said The Dursleys want all Magicals used as slaves and Worked to death or simply killed out right.

This is what I always wanted to hear because I am actually Severus Snape’s real daughter even though Harry is my real brother but I also get to share this devastating and beautiful story to my family in Hogwarts School. This is what I need for my film of The Gifted Child. ️. Love It.

This story is so catchy the happiness in this story is a snapehead

Bellatrix is actually a Black by birth she married in to the LeStrange family for blood purity.

Albus is gay JK Rowling confirmed it.