You've written this well and elevated this type of dancing as entertainment

Good

There are rules for reason. And guess what. Explicit shit is not allowed. Also, non-story notes aren't allowed. lol

Had a threesome with his mate and with his mate!
That is just too damned cute!

There's NOTHING WRONG with your content.
Frankly, I like "good-fucking" stories between men and women in committed relationships, e.g., marriage "Mates", Sesshomaru and Kagome's "good-fucking" scenarios.
They are beautifully written!
Keep up the damned good work!
Your Fanfiction is off the chain!

Wait... chapter 37 is how you think to end a story? I mean, despite the epilogue. I'm glad you did the epilogue because if that's how you'd choose to end this story i'd tell you to never write again. Also, great story as ive said before. But you REALLY overused the phrase her 'tiny/small/little frame' to the point that I was wondering if you've ever re-read your work. I feel like you could convey the same idea whilst still expanding upon your vocabulary. It was too repetitive. She small... we get it.

I really think you should look up the definition of "carnage" and compare it to "carnal." It's been used A LOT. Also, use of present vs past tense when writing. Often your words read more like notes in a script rather than a story being told because of it. But honestly, the story is amazing and pretty well written otherwise. Just grammatical errors that occur often.

HOTTT!

Good night!
Great fic, congratulations!
But if you do not ask too much, please make a great fic like this, except that Kagura in Kagome's place. Nothing against Kagome, I love her ...
But Kagura makes a perfect couple with Sesshoumaru, top couple!
Please, make a fuc of this couple. :)

La madre de Sesshomaru es loca y deja traumada a Kagome con los 6 cachorros Jajajaja
Me gusto mucho, buen escrito, buen final para todos los personajes
Gracias por escribirlo

Me encanto
Mas la parte en que pelearin Kagura y Kagome
Por fin desaparecio ese maldito de Naraku
Y la madre de Sessnomaru acepta completamente a Kagome
Espero que Kagome y su madre se puedan perdonar y estar bien juntas, además que kagome tiene qje aprender a controlar todas sus fuerzas

TT_TT lloro por el cachorro de Kagome y Sesshomaru, fue mucho poder para la criatura
Ahora Nakaru sabe que la perla esta con kagome, que pasará con eso
Ojala la tristeza por su bebé sea superada pronto

Aparerecera Kykio y ayudará a kagome
Como saldrán de esto Kagome y sesshomaru
Y Smitt sigue siendo un estorbo

Aun Smitt no se da cuenta de Kanna, pero ahora quiere a Kagome
pero que felicidad, Sesshomaru por fin se dio cuenta de la mentira de Kagura y naraku, que pasará después

Esperemos que Kagome pueda manejar mejor su cambio a Eden, con el intercambio de sangre pueda desarrollar mejor sus poderes
Ojala Nakaru no logre su cometido y no pueda hacer sus propositos con la empresa del padre de Kagome y las fotos no sea un gran problema TT_TT