You desperatelly need a beta; but it is a nice idea

after this chapter i want to read the next:)

What? You stopped there? Why! ANd they are thinking so wrong! Bella needs to NOT say anything! This won't end well, will it?... Thanks for updating! :)

Aww :( . This is cute! i can't wait to keep reading ! please update sonn!

please tell me you are not leaving this story like this. it is a great story but i want to know more. lol

I'm so confused.

im sory but this story has lost me im hopin it makes more scence when it goes along lol

wat the hell? i have no clue wat is goin on! that is REALLY frustrating!

aw. (tear rolls down cheek) i dont think anyone understands wat hes talking about, let alone bella.

HELLO?

WAT JUST HAPPENED? i would like some explenations!

tanya? already? do u just wanna kill them?lol. but wat was edward gonna say? "it'll only be...you."? that would be interesting.

okay, now im confused...does he really like her or is it just an act?

wow. even wen hes supposed to be pretending...edward is always protective of wats his.

ha! i agree that edward can be a heartless monster if he were to play with women's hearts. its a shame that he doesnt use his powers of dazzling for good instead of evil. :-(.lol.:-D

cant wait to read more but its kinda confusing