Definitely interested in where this story could go. Lots of potential.

Perfect! Better than the original, though a sequel still sounds nice...

Thank you for sharing your story with us!

I know I didn't ask the questions but I am grateful for the clarification on the hows and whys. I am loving the story so far.

Hello. Really good story here. I have enjoyed reading it the past couple days. Thanks for the entertaining read. Suzan Noerr

I love Edward, but there are times he could do with a good kick up the ... Well you get my drift. Good chapter. :)

Excellent chapter. ;)

Poor Bella. How lost she must feel. :( I think, though, this was so well written it was one of your best chapters. :)

Well Charlie being dead or laid up would improve the situation for B surely... or maybe some prejudiced wolves might enter the picture? ... Just thinking... :) Enjoying your story.

I have been reading this story of your's and really enjoying it. I just realised that 1/ I'm cooking and almost burnt dinner, and 2/ I haven't reviewed before now. Sorry. I do like your twist on the TS and the (except for Charlie) characterisation of the main players. Thanks for sharing your talent. :)

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This story is really good, but you need more, you need to write abt her change and what happens after.

I love the progression of your story, I really hope you continue thi story...

Please continue this story!

Great work on the story! :) Nice job developing the plot and characters!