A realistic snippet from the very probable life of a woman who must inevitably live with this tragedy for the rest of her life. The only thing I would add is her parents knowledge or lack of knowledge about their prize daughter's sexual orientation. Did Tory go back to living in the closet or did she finally get outed by her little sister or did she come clean on her own.

A brilliant premise, brilliantly carried off. And yes, I too find it ironic that Tory ended up with a girl after all her denial - and I think that that's really realistic. The only other thing I'd have liked to see would've been how her family took it, but with a piece as beautifully bittersweet as this I'm happy to cede that.

This was nice, I liked it. That was one of the questions I was left with after the movie; what happened to Tori? I liked your explanation of it, short and simple. Well writen.

Wow. Very powerful, beautiful, and sad. Very bittersweet to see Tory with another girl after all the lengths she went to to avoid Paulie.

Since I can tell you're a Buffy fan from your other works, the ending especially reminds me of the Season 2 ep "I Only Have Eyes for You..." The James/Grace relationship in a way is similar and the line where Buffy said that what James did was just something he was going to have to live with... IDK, maybe I'm crazy. Haha.

Anyway, nicely done!

i like this story...

~Rain Addict_CM