She would've came back as well? Since she was also on Mustafar and technically vitally important. I dont see her going back to Anikan, though since he killed all the young lings and almost killed her.

We have a problem. You have a writer's block and I'm a eager reader. So here are some suggestions.

-Lessons with dooku and branch off from there.

- Dooku and 'Anakin' bond together when discussing different cultures, Obi Wan in Anakins body starts acting more freely and open but still not telling Dooku. Dooku feels like he talking to an adult but encourages this instead of being openly suspicious.

- Dooku sees a memory from Obi during joined meditation. Dooku helps Obi cop but not too angsty about it.

Note: Having a chance meeting with good old Palps isn't recommended, cuts into the story development. Could be that Palps senses his presence and sees but doesn't engage.

WOW that's alot. Anyway that's some of my prompts if your having block. PLEASE UPDATE sometime in the future.

oh no. not the writer's block

I mean WHATTTT,?

I feel like only Obi Wan WOULD be clueless to Padme also time traveling. And oh by will Anakin be pissed if obi wan and padme are non the wiser to each others time travel! I can see things escalating hilariously over the next 10 years... not that their naivety would last that long... right?

I had never had a fic make me feel fond of Dooku.

Or consider Obidala from the get—go of their meeting.

This one acomplished both.

vorce be like: SHIT THE UNIVERSE IS FUCKED

I liked this story a lot.

(I also suspect Padme came back in time as well, or perhaps she's body swapped with someone else as well).

If the story lies dead and buried, so be it, but I know I and others would greatly enjoy seeing new life breathed into it again sometime.

Also, that vial of poison hidden in his drawer is going to cause problems down the road, I just know it.

I don't know if you'll get this comment, but I hope you do. This is a really good storyline. Will you one day continue it?

:-)

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Thanks for writing all of this, I enjoyed it.

I like it

This is a great story, I really hope you will update!

Gosh darn it. I need to check the last updated dates. This is so so good but updated 8 years ago. ;; If you ever do get back to writing I think I'd be overjoyed, but I get that it's an old story.

Best of luck on others things you write! If this is anything to go on, I have no doubt your works are gonna be good.

This is such a great fic and it's very sad to see that it has been dead for so many years. I guess writers block can be very bad sometimes.

Read this all the way through, non stop, and it was absolutely lovely. I really enjoyed the budding Dooku/Obi Wan bond. Way more than I thought I would when I first realized that was the direction you were taking it. Not sure if your planning on continuing the fic or not, but either way thank you for the read. :)