This is really interesting. Great story!

Interesting snippet!

Lol.

Chilling to think of him moving around the school like that.
Fantastic job.

I like the way you presented Tom's view.

A factor I have noticed in your stories is that the Toms from different stories aren't similar. That alone makes you a pretty good author as you're writing about the same person with different things happening to that person.

Awww...He's so mean!

Endearing, in a strange way-like all of the very brilliant and very lovely stories you write about this pairing are.

Or perhaps she was used to being ugly.

LOL, what a prick!

That was really good. I was grinning like an idiot at the end! :D

That was great POV rendition, very detached. Just like I think of Tom's POV.

Wow! Loved it!

IIIInteresting:)

Wonderful.

gah tom is mean! yet somehow endearing too...its strange. Very IC as well, i never saw that side of the basilisk attacks, in fact i never thought about tom being there. Weird. Anyway, i'll stop rambling, or you may die from boredom rading my meaningless "shpeal" you know there is probably a better spelling for that word, but you know what i mean! awesome story as ever! bz x

It was not what I expected but I liked it. It's so very Tom like. I liked how he sensed something about her, I also liked how he found the book with the missing page. For a moment I thought that he was going to find it. I loved it. :)