I hope you die a painful death for nerfing Naruto you piece of shit

So far, all I've seen is that you either don't like Naruto much or you just favour marvel characters. He's severely downplayed in this and the whole captain America being jonin is bullshit. He's skilled enough to be one but in speed, durability, he's no close. He can dodge bullets but any chunin can do that. Mach 1 is a relatively slow speed in the Narutoverse as curse seal sasuke dances around sound speed attacks. Pein threw a nail so fast it broke the sound barrier and Kakashi still had time to raise what little chakra he had left, channel it to his eye and use kamui. I was okay with your whole Naruto can't beat all the X men and all but when you began to purposely make him seen nerfed and downplay his abilities. I should have seen known since I saw you call shonen retarded. If you hate shonen, stick to seinen or don't watch anime at all. To see Naruto like this makes me sick

Listen, your complaints against how Naruto can beat any X man are very valid. I have to agree with you in all those but if you're going to make a story where Naruto's borderline useless and struggles to beat nearly every mutant he sees, you might as well just write a crossover where he's in the dragonballverse. I'm not asking you to nerf marvel characters or op Naruto but at least give him something he can use as an advantage. Naruto's greatest advantage in all shonen anime is the same in most. His speed. In a world where Naruto is admittedly very weak compared to many villians and heroes, he should have a powerful. In Dragonball, he's always very fast. In the fateverse, he's very smart. In DC, he's also smart and has greater combat skill than canon. It's fanfiction so of you just stuck to making all his powers strictly canon and place him in a stage where he's not very strong. His most powerful is sage mode which isn't very helpful in the marvelverse. In Marvel's maelstrom, he gained extra powers like cosmic sage mode. In 'a different hero' he has the sharingan. In 'into the cosmos, he also had the sharingan. If you wanted him to be strictly canon, you should have brought him at a better time. Crossover stories aren't fun when you have to read your favourite characters getting their asses handed to them left and right and not having enough power to change that. Give Naruto extra powers

your arguments are stupid... don't make Naruto into a dumb ass idiot who cannot do anything nd register his predicaments becoz of a glass building and a computer... be realistic you have never seen Naruto in a situation wer he is taken from his friends and precious people ND put in a whole new world so saying he will just accept it from the get go wen they tell him they will help u is dumb...give him a few weeks to absorb it at least...

not one talk coz that is not realistic at all... coz even a child will register sadness if he lost his mother in a carnival even if he is amazed by the site of all the rides and games... nd thats one of the things I hate abt naruto crossovers... authors exaggerate his loud mouth attitude and go lucky stupid attitude... incase u didn't know Naruto actually gets serious wen his life is in danger or his in a situation wer he knows his precious people are in danger just like how his teammates are left alone with orochimaru...

nd fuck you Naruto never holds back ... becoz clearly his never fought someone weaker then him in a death battle so wer does ur argument on that come from?

Wow. Just wow. It’s honestly amazing how much you downplayed the power of Naruto and Narutoverse as a Whole. I would go off on a rant saying you no nothing about the anime or manga if you honestly think captain America is a Jonin but I think xSean explains it a whole lot better

Cool story.

okay...you have downplayed Naruto's power a lot. By a lot, I mean astronomically. We are talking about guys who regularly break sound barrier as if no big deal. Punch mountains just for fun, and control elements like lightning while keeping up with it. Even at his weakest Naruto would have easily defeated most of the mutants. I won't say more, as xSean has basically covered everything I wanted to say. Sorry, but I can't read any more.

Still as great as I remember. Power scaling and some of the grammar is rubbish in my opinion but the character interactions really made this story great for me! So many chicks I would have liked to have seen Naruto get paired with. Laura, Cess and Laurie. Ms Marvel, Janet, Sue and Emma Frost. Nico! Have a soft spot for some of those characters, even if some of them weren't shown in a romantic or teasing light.

Real shame the sequel is dead.

How exactly does the Kyuubi take control here? Like really, Naruto fell unconcious. He does that every night when he sleeps. What makes this different?

So he was practicing the technique in the danger room right? I don't assume he just lays around bleeding out for half an hour or hours after every attempt so why was this one so severe?

Hell yeah, you severely underestimated Naruto. Captain America capable of making Jonin? I don't think so... Captain America is awesome but any competent Jonin would be capable of beating him. Never minding Elite Jonin like Guy or Kakashi. It's honestly baffling how much you have downplayed the Naruto Universe. I agree that Naruto isn't capable of taking out a lot of the big bads in Marvel but even at the beggining of Shippuden he should be beating Spidey, Captain America, The Punisher, Doc Ock, Shadow Cat and Multiple Man... Y'know I would go as far to say all of them actually. Does Multiple Man even have any buffs outside of Dupes and the knowledge they bring? If not he would get wrecked before his dupe could rig an explosive.

I disagree with a lot of what you said. First and foremost why do Ninja actually use Jutsu, Kunai, Senbon or any other tools? For Jutsu it is really quite simple, the more powerful it is the quicker it moves, it would be pointless using them otherwise. They are special techniques for lack of a better term. Would be stupid if the techniques couldn't catch up to a Ninja!

Kunai and other items, why throw them if they can easily be avoided? It's for the exact same reason, as a Ninja gets stronger they are able to throw Kunai faster. I don't think it is impossible to say that a lot of Ninja can throw their Kunai faster than bullets. If it doesn't follow along with what I said then those items and techniques would quite literally be useless in Naruto. Especially towards the end of the series where Naruto and the other top tier characters are beyond light speed. Dodge Kunai Level Reflexes, ha. If only they were that slow.

A lot of the arguments I seen in this chapter are what ifs for if Naruto fought the X-Men. Why you even replied is beyond me because what you wrote wasn't a Naruto vs X-Men. It was 4 Tailed Cloak Naruto vs X-Men where he is of a savage mind set. Not a normal sane Naruto.

How fast Quicksilver is as well, you are aware Kakashi literally cut lightning in half as a child right? Lightning is way quicker than Mach 5. Naruto is shown to be able to keep up with Kakashi towards the start of Shippuden, so he should be at least that fast. And it only gets quicker from there. Whats this you say? One version of Quicksilver is able to travel through time because he is so quick? Great, is that the version you are using in this fic though? I don't think so...

The topic of Wolverine being able to react to such speeds as well, I dunno about that. He definitely has more of a superhuman body compared to most mutants but I always see him getting his ass kicked and coming back for the win after healing. I love Wolverine, and his healing is vastly superior compared to the Naruto you have used but I don't think it's as easy as you seem to think for Logan.
Wolverine being able to react to that is irrelevant, Naruto is quicker.

Your comment about Cyclops seeing through Naruto's retarded attempts at strategy, why do you think so? They are quite genius for a supposed retard. Cyclops has zero knowledge at that time of Naruto's abilities, of how he uses them, of what to expect. So you tell me how exactly would he know if Naruto pulled a stunt like he did vs Zabuza? He can't know, he wouldn't be able to react to that either. He does have superior battle experience though but as we all know that doesn't mean it is his win. I honestly don't think Cyclops could knock Naruto unconscious even with a mistake. He is too fast, too durable and too strong for someone with a human body like Cyclops, perhaps if he had the X-Men backing him up though? Or maybe not.

Your issue with the shadow clones as well, they have a scent. They have all of the skills of the original Naruto as well as the physical capabilities. If he isn't using them for a distraction or they aren't being destroyed by a superior opponent it literally means being beaten before they even know how to react.

I feel like you ignored all of the feats achieved within Naruto quite honestly. Ignored all of the data books and their stats. Or maybe you were taken in by Naruto's 'slow combat' in the anime? A lot of people make the mistake thinking Naruto isn't all that powerful for that reason. A Ninjas power isn't as apparent as opposed to a show like Dragon Ball Z where the fight scenes are made to show them off as godly powerful. But they are really quite powerful. Or perhaps you just never thought of it much?

Who knows, this is probs a huge waste of time writing this all out but I simply felt like doing so. Maybe you will come back and publish another fic of this crossover with a more powerful Naruto like he should have been?

This is what I was talking about, in my honest opinion Naruto in his four tails form shouldn't have even been touched here. None of the X-Men he fought are quick in any capacity. They aren't shinobi who can reach insane speeds. His Tailed Beast Bomb exploding when colliding with Cyclops' Eye Beam should have destroyed the entire school and everything around it. The only way I could see him being beat is if Emma Frost and the Cuckoos got inside his head and calmed him down, which is dangerous. I am not all that knowledgable about the topic but it seems like they need to actually dive into his mind. It's not like the Sharingan's hypnosis. All of that Kyuubi's Chakra running through his mind and body would be harmful no doubt, especially to people who are still humans without durability or a healing factor.

Like someone said in another review, most Mutants are entirely human except for the one little quirk that makes them mutants. They all aren't super fast, super strong or even super intelligent. They all should have genuinely been flattened. Just my take on it.

Man this fic is recieving a lot of hate... I have read this a few times, enjoy it everytime. It does annoy me how you severely downplay Naruto and how you haven't done the sequel yet (If you ever even plan on continuing...) but to me this is one of the best fics out there. I find it to be written incredibly well, much more so than majority of the rubbish on this site!

this is a piece of wet sh*t