Great story! You should make another chapter plz

More pls update soonD

absolutely loved this, i really like pwp!

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You should make at least six more chapters, you know, to make up a week, then for the finally have Sam turn the tables. Cause, so far, the way its written, it doesn't seem finished, and you rushed it a bit. Though, then again, I admit, this was genius, so weither or not you take my advice or not is your choice, but please, consider it.

Think of Steven King, you know, the book, Misery, where an author is at the mercy of his obsessed fan, but don't hurt Sam. A little sexual tension, yeah, but no bodily harm.

Dean should do things to himself, in full veiw of Sam, but adjust Sam's position on the bed so he's slotched up against the head board, still tied, as he is forced to watch his brother play with himself. Just to make him horny enough to want the abuse, but be deprived of it.

And when Sam manages to get loose, He should probably do the same, only drag Dean to the middle of the forest, tie him to a tree, and get some chick to screw, while Dean is forced to watch.

oh, and how does the bondage come in? I didn't fully get that part, I thought you'd use hospital restraints, like the ones from the ep. 'Sam, interupted'. So, seriously, take this under advisment, look up sex toy's, and find one's that are painful, like a dildo for instence. And possibly, Get Castiel to use his angel mojo to assist Dean in his little escapade. Cuz, that, and I mean that, would make this story even more original, I mean think about it, Phantom touching, whithout Dean having to lay a hand on Sam, and even, possibly, a little Bruce almighty action. Some candle's to set the mood, some feathers, and lotions and oils, to Massage Sam. Like they use at spas. Seriously, please, write more to this, cuz, I'd like to see Sam's revenge, just don't hurt the impala. wait, never mind, get a replica of it, and then make Dean watch as its destroyed, or even put an airbag in the drivers seat. Or super glue in his shampoo, or possible buttering the floors. Just add more, I know you got more Ideas, hell, I'm full of them. I just am undisided. So if you want to ask about what I'm gettin at, just respond to my post.

Scitz, here, and wait,... She's gone.

I love it! Very convincing and they were within character. Sequel or perhaps Multi. Chapter *hint hint* . . . Please. Love, Sudi

Sure he 'honestly was'... eventually. Lol. This was... yummy.

I love this...like a lot...that shouldn't have been that hot.

Love,

Nick

Great fic.

[hint]It needs a sequel.[/hint]

That was a wonderful story...very discriptive and believable...you have a wonderful sense of humour and i hope this isn't the last story you write for us.

Cheers

Vicki

I know one thing, I would be Dean's captive anyday

oh, this story is good! Are you going to write a sequel, Sams revenge maybe?

i loved it

I like the story. Are you going to continue it?

hahaha interesting story! are you going to write a sequal or second chapter so we can see if Sammy gets free or not? I'd read it if you did!

This ... is terribly, terribly hot.