Comeone on man or woman. I like this. Sad ithere is no more chapters but this is very good :)) ;)

Oh no, don't stop! I love this and I want to know what happens next

Is this going to continue? If it is I'm so waiting next chapetrs. This is amazing :D

This is sooooooo good! Please update! Stupid Voltaire, I hope Rei keeps Kai safe.

heeeeey, i got an idea!

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WHY DON'T YOU INSERT A LEMON IN THIS STORY?

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yeah yeah i'm being very pervy but really you never wrote a beyblade lemon, you only wrote rape scenes not a nice lemon! :(

you should try one you know as this story just has the perfect settings! it'll be very emotional encounter in my opinion since kai's rei's slave here! XO

and dude, you gotta update know... it's over two years since you last updated! you don't wanna disappoint your beyblade fans do you? this story is really sweet and i know you have some awesome scenes under your skin, i can just feel it. ;)

though i don't want you to update for just the sake of update, don't do that cuz it'll reflect in the writing!

anyway, hope you'll squeeze a nice super hot lemon here! :3

Update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

not bad, this has gotten quite interesting. I hope Rei can protect Kai, it looks like the next three chapters, will be VERY interesting.

I had lost story. Then I found it... Yay! I wonder what's Bryan going to do? Please update soon! I like it! XD

Voltaire just screws everyone over, doesn't he? -.-, anyway good job on this story.

WWWWWHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYY! It was getting soooooooooooooooooooo good! Your a really really good writed by the way i've read 2 of you storys but alas you havent finished eaither *sob* they were really great to...please don't let your storys die not when they have so much portencal!

this is an awesome Fanfic i can't until its continued XDD although there are a few doubled word's but im not hating im just saying that if its a pause please put a . or a , but anywho this is great

aw so cute so painful so sad so orignial so unoriginal so high class so poor so happy so sorrowful so inspiring so cliche oh dear kami-sama look at all the so's neh oh well anyways nice story hun would really love it if you would update it though lol

Hi

And Bryan has found Kai!

I sure can't wait for more.

please, update soon

Beywriter

loved this chapter. Bryan has found kai yay. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

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woah that was great chapter and i guest i had to wait see what going to happen between ray and his cousin next chapter and i glad you update the story and thank for laughter and it was kinder cute that ray been nice to kai and i could wait and see the bloom between them. thank for update story, cya until next time :)