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Starting off by saying I do like this story.

My kinda-gripe about it is the British-isms. It takes me out of the story to "hear" the American characters speak like they are English/British.

I'd much rather see a Bella and Edward being born, raised, and living in England and them acting authentic than reading a story that tries to stick with Forks, Washington as it's location when there seems to be anachronisms in the way they speak, etc.

But, this chapter was sweet. I like how he's falling for her (if he really admitted it to himself, he was probably ga-ga over her to begin with, but he seems to appreciate her now...instead of her just being another notch on his bedpost).

The change in POV was off on this chapter. There's a small segment in the middle where it's Bella's POV, but the "BELLA" notification is after the fact.

I'm really liking this story so far.

Are you ever going to write the epi? I loved this story.

This story is awesome. I liked the articles that he read. Even though its almost done please don't give up on thw story. Feel the satisfaction of making it complete. Lol. I just wanna know what happened next.

PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! Write an epilogue! I loved this story!

Do they live in Seattle or Forks? i thought it was in Seattle and Bella and Jasper's aunt lives in Forks?
great story :)

epilogue!

I love your story. I guess that there is no epilogue. Too bad, I would like a future look at everyone.

Mickey

This is a really fun story. I am really enjoying reading it. Thanks!

Mickey

So far, so good!

This is so fucking cute333

*sigh* i love cheesy, fluffy romance! whens the epilogue coming?;)

ooh~~ gotta love kissing in the rain;)

That was one of the sweetest stories I have ever read. It made me laugh, most definitely made me cry and well it just straight up made me fall in love. I loved this story oh so much.(: