A tad OOC, yes, but still a good read. Your other reviewers have already hit the other points. I hope you write more Yuunoha in the future.

Well, finally.

After lots of NanoFate fic that clustered this section, a new variety is good. Keep writing, and I hope your next nanoha fic will also featured Yuuno/Nanoha. Thanx.

AS is spoiling the pleasure of reading new things on ... T_T

Still nice. Keep it up~ And I like your sn here. n.n

~KL

P.S. why don't you accept anon reviews? (not that I ever submit anon reviews anyway but...)

To Funya-n,

Well, I do not mean to be riding in on mon ami Person's coat tails, but yes, very much so, congratulations for having the guts to write a Yuunoha, period. This section and I dare say the fandom in general is in bad need of a breath of fresh air and variety, so to speak.

As for the story itself, well, Person already hit all the points, without being anywhere near as long winded, detailed, as I would have been. Though I must thank you for sticking to an interpretation of the hugely ambiguous character relationships that is fair, and I think is true, based at least in the recent direction the creators have taken post-StrikerS.

Sincerely,

Your Friendly Neighborhood J-Easy.

Let me just congratulate you on simply writing Nanoha with Yuuno at all. You may know how this section can get. I suppose that's fine too, but variety spices life, yeh?

As for the story itself, I suppose possibly OOC, but that's because we always see Nanoha being a saint in the anime. I think the story's solidly written. I'm sure it could be improved somewhere, since it strikes me as kinda written with this average kinda fluffy voice. But, again, the writing's still a hell of a lot better than what you can see in many other places. Good job.