Nice writing but I didn't like the lying and deception Bell did in the end. I felt bad for Alice and no one deserves that. Plus the forgiving after 3 words exchanged did't sit well with me. Alice deserved better.

Great story

great chapter!

This story makes me happy.! I just wish there was more.!

Why is she putting Alice through all this.? I feel so bad for her. I hope it gets better.

I like Jacob in this story. The others he's in, he's such a total d bag. But I love it this story.!

My gosh. This is just too cute.

I so wish there was a way for this story to continue, this story has hit me so hard emotionally since I started reading it earlier this week, I love it so much, I have actually felt the pain and anger and sadness, and so many other emotions from the characters, especially Alice, while reading it that my stomach was doing back flips, and there are so few stories out there that are written well enough to have actually been able to get this reaction out of me, I love this story more than anything I've ever read before and I wish there was a way it could continue, but even if there isn't, it was such a great story.

creo queTe falto la boda

*silently agrees with the A/N comment and watches warily from afar for more voltori.* fucking bastards... * I growl spitting in distaste as I think of the voltori and their nasty tricks*

yaa thank god I mean finally, I'm looking forward to it

Grrr getting so frustrated reading twilight fan fics so damn many of them are so filled with angst where Bella begs to be changed but it doesn't happen till the last chapter and all the other chapters involve putting off it constantly, dammit just change the poor girl already. Regardless I'm still enjoying the story

Lovely ending.

Okay.

Bella's smart again.

Yeah.

Bella's stupid.