That was a dream Damn you got me all worked up

Wow, I had a smimilar dream once and this story immediately reminded me of it. The scene with the coat was really cute! :)

I could tell at once that you enjoyed writing this!

A word of advice: Don't use numerals (1 2 3) when writing numbers, unless they're being referred to like that. If there are two people, use "two." If there's a giant number 2 painted on a wall, use "2." Sometimes it's up in the air (does a character reading a serial number say "5-3-0" or "five three oh/zero?"), but in most cases in this fic you should write the whole word.

Do you have a betareader? I really liked the story on the whole, but some things need ironing out, and a beta really helps with that. Good job, though, and thanks for supporting this awesome pairing.

I'm impressed. I didn't really expect this story to be that good but it is. Very well done! *favorites*

Great story. keep writing please

great story keep on writing

great story. D

good fic, i didn't expected it to be rain walking up after having a dream about herself walking up after having a dream:)

great work

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