Reviews for Hold My Hand
justawritier chapter 4 . 2/11/2009
great story. Really enjoyed it.
stillcharmed chapter 4 . 9/23/2008
After reading this fanfic, I just had to review it, because I enjoyed reading it so much. It was superbly well-written and I am impressed by how creative and meaningful it was. Well done and I hope to read more of your fanfics soon.
GravityMuse chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Gorgeously done. I absolutely love the format of this story, and the way that the individual chapters about each of the sisters unfolds: each one is heartbreaking in a different way. You've moved me to sign up for this website to make my first comment, after months of lurking. This is all just really, really well crafted, and now I'm anxious to hear the guys' sides!
Christine Ruud chapter 4 . 9/11/2008
This was absolutely fantastic. I loved every single section of every single chapter.

As for a companion piece with the four men, I would be ecstatic to read that, especially because of Cole's demonic past and Leo's wife.

Amazing!
Silvermoon77 chapter 4 . 9/11/2008
That was beautifully written! You should definitely write the companion piece XD I'll be looking forward to it.
thisistooembarassing chapter 4 . 9/11/2008
YES! i support the companion piece! i enjoyed this one so much, it was undeniably real, and one for the guys would be great...
Princess Pinky chapter 4 . 9/11/2008
I thought this was great! I loved how Glenn took up the first two places on Paige's list. *giddy* I love them so much, they'll always be one of my four perfect couples. I think my favorite one was the first one, where Glenn held her hand at Gale's wedding. That just made my little shippy heart sing with glee.

But I also really liked the one about Buzz. At first I thought it was just a silly sex relationship, and apparently Paige did too, but I loved how you surprised us with having his character be so important in her life: the end to her drinking. Amazing! I think that was my second favorite part of Paige's chapter, because it wasn't something I was expecting but it was written beautifully.

And I would LOVE for you to do a Andy, Leo, Cole, and Henry companion piece! I think Leo's history with Lillian would be of particular interest. As well as Andy with Susan. (And Cole and Henry? Bounds of possibilities.)

Might I also suggest a companion/sequel featuring Patty, Grams, and Melinda Warren? We know that Patty loved both Sam and Victor, that Grams had Jack (well, renamed Allen on the show) and the Necromancer (and four to six other husbands), and that Melinda had Prudence's father and Matthew Tate, but we don't know a whole lot about the "specifics" or all of the people inbetween. I think there is a wealth of possibility there and I would love to see how you treat each of those specifically. (P. Baxter would also be an interesting one, so see how she ended up choosing Gordon Johnson over Leo's past life, though I don't think it's as interesting as Patty, Penny, and Melinda.)
lizardmomma chapter 4 . 9/11/2008
very good job
XsunflowerX chapter 3 . 9/7/2008
I think I liked Piper's a little bit more than Phoebe's but I liked the second installment of Phoebe's if only because, to me, the sister fluff was sweet :)

Keep 'em coming
Christine Ruud chapter 3 . 9/5/2008
This is my new favorite story. It's...it's amazing. That's what it is. You're delving into the unexplored pars of the sisters' personalities and it's so GOOD. This chapter was sad...but an accurate reflection of Phoebe. The fifth part was...wow. It's such a great chronicle of Phoebe-from hopeful and in love with romance to tired and ready for the search to end.

Marvelous.
lizardmomma chapter 3 . 9/5/2008
very good job
Christine Ruud chapter 2 . 9/3/2008
Oh, so very sweet.

And I am excited times NINETY about the next chapter! Phoebe and Cole, here we come! Your writing makes it so...perfect.
Princess Pinky chapter 2 . 9/3/2008
Wow, I think it's amazing how you turned Piper and Leo's eternal, sweet, soulmates love sad. And I don't mean that sarcastically at all. I'm just surprised...you did it so realistically too.

Now I can't wait to see what you do for Paige! Her first love, Philip Lewicky (sp?) and of course her true love, Glenn Belland! *sigh*

And Phoebe, too. I wonder how you'll play the parallels with people with Clay, Cole, and Coop. (Wow, she dated a lot of people with "C" names. lol)

Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait for tomorrow's!
xheart to thee chapter 2 . 9/3/2008
You know I would like this one because it contained a small piece of Piper/Leoness. I love the fact that most of your fanfictions delve into their younger years (teenager years etc.) I really enjoy that.

Ps. I just noticed you have changed your "Current Obsession" on your profile...I am so obsessed with The X Files lately. It was the new film that did it for me...I have managed to watch a lot of episodes and the first film in a week...I am proud!
lizardmomma chapter 2 . 9/3/2008
very nice job
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