hmm good
Would be a pleasure if you read one of my book sakshiagarwal017

playinh bad boy for voldie, it weird. should playing nice like barty to harry for his trust that is best strategy. like friend close and enemy closer thing.

Great
Love it

Fantastic I would really like to read more

Why not use stupify and incarcerous?

Sorry, stopped reading on the 11 chapter. I hoped it would become better, but spanking because of fair emotional burst made it. Your characters say all big words about punishment but it seems to them that they can make a point only with pain. It is really wrong. Makes me sick.
My father used such methods, and I still don't like it when other people touch me. It was really hard for me to get used to receive hugs from my friends, to not feel a disgust and fear of a mere touch. Spanking may not abuse, but it still gives you an emotional scar. Adults should just stop justifying it.

At least Harry is not a liar.

Amazing

A 12 yo threatening to spank a 6 yo? I would not be happy if I were their parents. That's beyond the acceptable limits of a sibling relationship In my opinion

Polka dots! Laughing so much.

You post this in like 2008 so you probably won't get this or you don't go on this account or something but I thought it was worth it to write a review, so can I start off by saying I when I read this i stayed up till 5 on a school night and I laughed Into my pillow so my family wouldn't wake up. Like this was just so amazing and well written and I cried and laughed and got angry and I just wanted to say thank you for this

I loved this story hope the new story soon!

This was a really great book! I enjoyed every page.
Lisa

This book is really good. I like reading this type of fanfics.

Thanks for the story I have injoyed the story thank you for your time and talent with the story