Me gusto esta historia, y si concuerdo contigo en que vash es un principe.

Wo: *Beat him to it* I almost had an orgasm reading this story *smirked impishly, although eyes were shy slightly from barely seen embarrassment*

Narrator: *Grumbled irritably with a shake of the noggin*

this was cute, however, in basic human logic,(my logic) if i was that guy with the gun and had hated someone deeply, planned on shooting him, i would have followed out the plan, but hey. Meryl didn't die. Vash is okay and nobody died I'd say thats a damn good thing. but wait! where the heck is Millie? other then that and aside that nobody died or was EXTREMELY badly injured (i count that as a bad thing but hey, if anything i could be compaired to knives)

aside from all that, i liked this, it was cute and too the point. so...yeah...awsome job D

I love it! So cute and romantic! One of my favorites.

Cute! I like it.

cool story al fluffy and filled with love but can u make a svenxeve fanfiction if you have reade or seen the anime black cat?

OMG!

I LUV IT!So cutie-woutie adorable!

Ge!

Great job!

I wouldn't call it cliche! I thought it was very sweet, and i love a good dose of fluff :D Great job!

its cheesey, but in good way!