God damn 95% of Naruto fanfic authors should never be able to write. Do any of you ever proofread and realize how terrible your concepts are

The baby goat this was about much after the third time

You know into spying/eavesdropping would be considered tantamount to treason right no matter her connections

Nooooooooo it’s not finished and cute little Minato is stuck in unfinished-fanfic limbo! How dare u harm our little baby goat?! Evil Teme…

I was interested in this story but it turned into shit real fast

huh...

hahahaha love it

Hahaha with this many OCs this fanfiction shouldn't even be in naruto section ffs m8 cmon

Naruto and Minatos relationship reminds me of the God of War game. Lol

This went on being great to being a trash wow can't even discipline your child you expect minato to live why don't just kill him already you fucking if you don't know im saying it's sarcasm you f**king shit of a author

plzzzzzzz continueeee

...words can't describe how fast this story degenerated. Guess its time to find another story. Preferably one that makes sense. Instead of having him spill that much information before vanishing, he should have said nothing and simply vanished. Having him pretty much reveal who he was before vanishing is your worse idea.

Naruto rants about things which leads to his identy being revealed. Words can't describe how retarded that was. Seriously.
"My father was the yondaime hokage" if naruto wanted to keep his identity a secret, he wouldn't have revealed anything?

Please finish this story. You have done such a good job so far. I know it's been several years. If you see this, know that I love you story.

Next chapter please!