Hey there! Firstly I want to say that I enjoyed your story but I'm afraid I'm reviewing for a much more serious reason. After reading your fic I came across another that bore striking resemblance to your own. At first I thought it was a coincidence but after reading it the whole way through I realized that it wasn't and that the story was posted 2 years after yours. The author is VampireNight and the story is a summer night to remember. I have sent a message to VampireNight asking her to remove the story but I thought it would be best to bring it to your attention.

i re-read this and re-read it, but it only seems to get cuter and send little quivers down to the tips of my fingers.

haha

i love it

i like it

Ah! that was sweet! they are perfect together! well done it was a good story!

Liz

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i like the "of course it was the're perfect for each other" part. so did they plan the whole truth and dare get bella drunk enough to dare him or did that just happen

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Woah. this is realy good. my friend alarni recommened it to me. and its awesome. love it (: xx

i absolutely love this story!

its really funny, and its so cute at the end!

YOU'RE A REALLY GOOD WRITER!

thank you for posting it.

I loved both endings, but you should continue this story. Your an excellent writer.

I loved this chapter. Why can't all guys be like Jasper? NO games and sexy as hell!

Ah this was friggen too cute! I loved it

I liked the story :)

It's really cute.

Awesome :D

Aww!

I absolutely love this story! :D

Would you consider doing a "sequel"?

Great job! :)

-Pepa :)

The last line is great! : )

i really liked this story. there is a lot more you could do with it; like with the back story. i'm gonna go check out your other work now (if you have anything posted) )