Great story I love your writing, but really? Wicked stuff every five seconds talk about copy write. If you were trying to make a musical make up your own music. I find copying and pasting music from an original script annoying and non creative.

it was *sniffle* so beautiful. anyway great story *cough* watch jackfilms*cough*. sorry i think I may have caught hay fever

a great writer you have became. a great writer indeed.

I hade the urge to cry because you kinda explained my life becuase my parents if I ever get in trouble bring Traci in saying why can't you be like her she went to med school! And the everyone liking her better... And that my dreams aren't ever gonna come true..

I kinda cried at that point I love this stupid story. The good kind of stupid.

OMG I LOVED THIS STORY!

I CRIED 4 TIMES!

soo good!

As sadistic I can be, this story reduced me to near tears. It just goes to show that you should never give up on your dreams, whether they are impossible, or not. Bravo, I say, Bravo!

You know, it's amazing how many wonderful things can spring from tragedy. If Marc hadn't broke Rose's heart, she might never have run away and met Dusk, Seth, Cheri, and, most importantly, Hakumei.

It's a shame Sinnoh Stuggles died. I hope it gets revived eventually.

this was a nice story but it seems more of a backstory of some sort. so where is the main story?

this is so good...it made me cry. you are really talented with this story. i'm gonna miss it

SO. FREAKIN'. AWESOME. Amazing story! I'll always love your stories...they're just so good! I'm writing a Mystery Dungeon one. Please read it if you would!

...I wish this had a sequel or something...:D

BYE

Winter

Wow. That's cool that Point thinks Valentina is brave.

Oh. Poor Valentina. She wanted to talk to Marc privately and she found out about his and issabella's arranged marriage and how they're officially mates now.

the song that Valentina sings at the end is "Defying Gravity" from the play Wicked. That is such a perfect song for her cause in it Elphaba says how much she wants to fly and that's what valentina wants to do

That's just too horrible for words what Twire, Iron and Point were doing to valentina

Hehe... sorry it took so long for me to actually read that... Great job! That was a wonderful ending!

Yay! Amazing epilogue, HP! Sunsetshipping! Yay! 3 Go you!