lol that was funny

Funny ;D

XD good story!

haha I thought it was cute.

ah, it's me again. anyways, i love Wrath's childish behavior and Envy's horrible temper. it makes a great one-shot. good job on this and i also like the Halloween side story too! Byebye from WOLFxARCHER

omg LOL! that was so funny man the way you made envy sound made him sound as if this was off of an FMA episode or a manga chapter lol this was so funny 'envy your a horrible story teller...' envy had enough of it and told a 'story' to wrath walks out of the room and then brotherly love LOL!

roflmao

"One day an annoying little homunculus would not go to sleep and leave the older homunculus alone, he was strangled to death, THE END!"

Nice.

-Lynn-

Hey I know it's your first fanfiction and I have some advice to make it better. I made this mistake on my first fanfic to, please use spacing. It's very hard to read and will turn off people to read your story. Please redo it and add paragraphs and spacing.

Hey! I just read Wrath's Bedtime Story and I loved it! It really made me laugh

Nice job!

Kei-chan

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Haha, another great story Dusky :)

Great! Really funny

I love this wonderful encnta me please please still remains still keeps writing more stories Please! please this fantastic.

Attn: your friend and admirer fan: dragonsita of love.

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