| Reviews for The Thirst for Midnight Sun |
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Guest chapter 8 . 1/4/2019 We, the readers demand more. How many pretties do I have to put before please for you to continue! |
anyeshabaner chapter 14 . 11/17/2018 awww.. come on! i need more... please write the full story . dying to read more |
Guest chapter 13 . 7/19/2018 You did an awesome job! I would love to see you finish the entire series from his POV :) |
Alta chapter 1 . 12/3/2016 Loved it. Please keep going |
tiana chris chapter 2 . 8/10/2016 I'm just reading it but I think it's beautiful.. |
Arctic Fox chapter 1 . 2/26/2016 Really enjoying your continuation. Very high quality writing but if I was to give any feedback (only because you requested it) I would advise you to cut back on some of you adjectives. Although your writing is beautifully descriptive, this is sometimes to the point of hindering your flow because your action /description leval seems rather too tilted towards the latter. I know this is something I also struggle with in my writing. Hope this is useful:) |
Keltyr chapter 14 . 7/4/2015 This is a lovely version of EPOV Twilight. More? |
Jenna Gilmore chapter 8 . 6/12/2015 Excellent job! |
Dreadful Oblivion chapter 14 . 3/18/2015 Please continue it Please please please please please It's awesome so far! Please continue it |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2014 U have to continue! |
sj chapter 3 . 7/9/2014 Really strayed from the not seem like adward and bella which makes me think, maybe u can write your own change the names n bingo! |
sj chapter 2 . 7/9/2014 Edward fidgeting seems I like d to get into edward's head |
Shadowhunter-Herondale chapter 1 . 2/23/2014 I think its very good. I totally agree with you Stephenie Meyershould have contined the story because eEdward's version is better than Bella's |
Joey chapter 14 . 9/5/2013 Hi l have read a few versions of this story and this has to be one of the most enjoyable ones l have read,l have always wanted someone to cover the difficulties edward must of had not with just his thirst for bella's blood but the fact that he has never been in love before or had any physical relationship with anyone especially a human plus he is a vampire that alone should scare away any normal human but bella loves him and he alone can not even love have covered all these issues beautifully this story could have easily been passed off as Stephanie's herself so please please continue it and never doubt your talent it would be amazing if you was to complete the whole set in edwards view l know l would read up the good work. Joey |
ginnypotter1596 chapter 5 . 8/13/2013 Yes, I'm reading a twilight fanfic, and yes my name is ginnypotter1596, ok? You can like both. Not that I particularly enjoy twilight, because Bella is so boring, but I do love Edward's POV, so I will read this. Tis true, Midnight Sun did leave much to be desired, and I love your story, because it so reflects Stephenie Meyer's view of Edward. Thank you for writing, it brings me pleasure. Goodbye! |