| Reviews for The Love of Mall, Vanilla Fraps and Tickets |
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CupidLove chapter 3 . 9/26/2012 I hope u update soon! great story so far! |
Akira102 chapter 3 . 8/13/2012 omg omg moree! that is soooo cute! w |
cheapshot999 chapter 3 . 11/29/2009 it was really good hope you make more .**P |
MissInvisible2 chapter 3 . 11/17/2009 Wow :) what a story and plotine! I really enjoyed reading this, and would love if you wrote more :P This story is amazing, and the detail/description you go into is fantastic, as the reader can imagine each scene and character with ease :D You're a skilled writer, so thanks for your story so far, and would love if you updated! Off to check out your other story aswell, anyways hope you update soon _ |
XxSakuraxHobo2X101101xX chapter 3 . 7/9/2009 love it |
darksoulwolf chapter 3 . 3/13/2009 ok...I want more and to see if Ino brakes Sakura's heart come on...more story please |
syuchang chapter 3 . 1/11/2009 They fell in love rather quickly... but hey... who am i to judge? all in all its a good story, im hoping you will update it soon |
SleepingRedWolf chapter 3 . 10/12/2008 Hey great story so far hope you continue to keep writting ) |
Senbonzakura chapter 3 . 9/17/2008 haha omg only thing i can think of saying is 'zomgthatwasfreakinghawwt!' anyway...i'll run away now _ ; psst...GREAT JOB ON THE STORY SO FAR hope you update soon! -continues running away- |
Vanessa Riverton chapter 3 . 9/17/2008 LOL enjoyable chapter! Some grammar here and tehre was off but pfft who cares! Was so much fun to read! -VR |
Vanessa Riverton chapter 2 . 9/17/2008 LOL I love Ino... she's so awesome! Loved this chapter! -VR |
Insomniackid7 chapter 3 . 9/15/2008 Nicely detailed, Good Job! |
WeWillNotDestroyYou chapter 3 . 9/14/2008 oh wow. I love this. you writ it so well! I loved the entire thing and completely fell in love with the story when they were in bed together! UPDATE SOON! |
I Spaz With Pizzazz chapter 3 . 9/14/2008 x3 i love this chapter. ino tricked her into skinny dipping. ha. that is awesome. but she hould still listen to her friends' warnings, because ino is not as nice as she seems. because she can't be, right? i don't trust her quite yet. xD write like zoom, i hope! :3 ~lazzy |
x-charcoal-moon-x chapter 2 . 9/7/2008 he he great i love the length of the chapters most are too short but these are good! also story so far is awesome cand can't wait to find out what happens next hopefully some "action" :P nah im not lyk that but yeah u seem to have a great style of writing and ure gr8 and building sexual tention so yeah can't wait 2 see how u write a kiss scene wich i sincerely hope you do! |