Aw I think it was sweet. I like that BJ got her a baby tarantula. I think you did an excellent job on this story. I felt bad for Lydia and just wanted to give her a hug to try to make her feel better. Glad the " ghost with the most" showed up when he did, she could have gotten a lot worse. Great Job and keep up the great work writing. Happy Halloween. :D

Very sweet. I love the baby tarantula.

This so nice I love it.

aw...i thought it was a cute story

nice. I don't know too much about beetlejuice ,but the story was pretty good.

Aww. That was cute. You did a good job, especially for your first time. They weren't out of character either. I really like the title too!

not bad for a first time. Nice job!

not bad for a first shot. It seemed a little short though and you probably could have done a bit more with their time apart but for the most part, it was cute and they weren't too out of character. Very nice.

I like the idea of him giving her a baby tarantula. Didn't seem too out of character to me. And for a first try, it's definitely a good start. Least in my opinion. Huh. :)