Reviews for No Way Out |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is gd |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope Harry comes to the rescue. UPDATE SOON PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was certainly interesting... I really hope that Harry see's this and gets back to her as soon as possible before Dean does succeed. It is time that Ginny knew the truth about who saved her and while it may not bring them back together at least Dean will be out of the picture. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've taken the strong, vibrant Ginny Weasley and made her a pathetic druggie. What is the point of her being common and a loser? It merely illustrates that your Ginny actually isn't good enough for Harry and I don't expect that from a H/G fic. You've got to think about whether the actions are in-character and if they're not, why you're putting them in the fic. If it's to shock the reader or because you are going through these problems yourself, then it's not a good enough reason. If you really want to write about a character like this, then create an original character instead of using Ginny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really think that the next chapter should be Hermione's POV... you know to see her reaction to the letter... ans also have Harry and Ron suspicious because she wouldn't show them the letter and have them sneak and read it and also have their reaction to the letter also... I think that would be a good chapter. Whatever you write I know will be great! BTW Great chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter to come my way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is something i can feel it my attention is grabbed and it is very heavy, Woot Woot ! cant wait to read more ! xD |
![]() ![]() cutting and drinking? noo plz! |
![]() ![]() noo, please dont have ginny start cutting herself. she is much to strong to fall into that trap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.M.G. that was really good! there are so many things i wanna say about amanda but theyll most likely get bleeped out when you read this.. the ending was great though! loved it! amanda brown? wouldn't people think shes related to lavender? oh well you can explain later.. great job thuanny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy shit! dean is such an ass hole! dick move buddie dick move! i knew that harry loved her i wish ginny could see it too. does dean know that harry was visiting her? that he was always there and hes the one that loves her? where the hell did he get the specific details about everything? next chappie? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! IT doesn't matter if it is short just as long as you posted one! I HATE DEAN! PLEASE MAKE HIM GO AWAY! Can't wait for the next chapter! Post Soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a slimy git... I really hope that Harry finds out what he did and makes him pay. At least Ginny doesn't return the feelings |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! That's the only thing I can say... I favourited |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the base of this story. However, reading it is almost impossible as you misspell every other word. And, I would ask that you choose which perspective you want to do this story in and stick with it. it gets very confusing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg this was really good! loved the ron/hermione part! (as you knew i would!)o ginny wakes up just a few minutes after Harry leaves her... well i know what happens so i really shouldn't be complaining.. lol ) can't wait 'til the next chapter! lol the way hermione said "Ronald." cracks me up every time...! i can just picture emma watson actually saying it! |