I have been waiting so long for this story to update... or someone to take over. Loved this story since the beginning. I hope you can come back. ;-;

did someone adopt this story.? if not please try and finish it. it's too good to be left incomplete.

I'm always annoyed by unfinished work.
But I suppose you get what you pay for and in the case of fanfiction... its nothing.

i so love how you used dan cooks line in this i sooo lost it and very well placed in the fight

Why is naruto barely in this if its narusaku?

BEST ENDING FOR A CHAPTER! NARUSAKU ALL THE WAY
great job

this was really good but i think it wouldve been more epic and badass if Naruto was just a lot stronger and wiped the floor with Lee. Everyone wouldve been stunned

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HOLY FU** THIS IS SO DAMN GOOD
SUPER CREATIVE AND JUST PURE AWESOMENESS! GREAT JOB

Awww, well that's okay. I hope you can someday get your mojo back. If not, I'm pretty satisfied and I'm happy you've all let us know what you've been up to. :)

Best of luck,
BookLovinWorm

I like the orignality behind this fic. It's an AU, that has potential, but your style of writing is a little too shallow to really make the fic Interesting. For one, I have no idea how old they are now, and the scenes just fly by filled with sasuke bashing and things that don't really add to the story. If u spent more time focusing on explaining the plot and characters, this could he a really great fic.

You're very welcome I was glad to help. the story intrigued me and I just saw some things that with only minor work on your part helped clean things up and make for a much smoother story closer to what you were trying to tell.

which was a lot of fun to read and enjoy. I hope youll take the rains of Tanebi part 2 and continue to tell the story in your own way. Ill be glad to offer any advice you need as always.

I very much have enjoyed your story up to now. I an very excited to see more chapters. Thank you for a very entertaining read. I look forward to seeing how this story continues to unfold.

This story is one of the best stories I have read on here and I just want to know when you will start again and I probably know it's been a while since you wrote this but it is reallllyyyy good !
Like amazing 3

Interesting, I rarely read Naruto/Sakura fics but yours is well written. A few spelling errors and a couple grammatical ones, all in all though GREAT STORY!

Also I'm caught up in F, V, & W, Great story there too!

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You are evil to stop there!

YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! OR ELSE I WILL BURST!