AWESOME story

Nice and i think you should do a series

This story was awesome!

That was amazing, I loved reading it. Well done

Hooray for albus and rose

I really don't like the fact of Albus being in Slytherin and being friend of Scorpius sorry, it just doesn't fits.

An interesting chapter.

Harry's son in Slytherin; a brave choice.

Not sure how I feel about it yet but, it does add to the tension.

I like how you've improved the standing of Slytherin, making them less evil. This is something that I've touched on in my own writings.

Koya'cyi

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Another excellent chapter. I particularly liked your Sorting Song.

One criticism I did have was that too many old students seem to be coming back, in strange places.

Parvati and Padma as Nurse and Librarian seems a little far fetched to me.

Otherwise, very enjoyable.

Koya'cyi

Frontline

A good start, although a little confusing at first. A lot of characters being introduced makes it hard to keep up, but that also adds to the intrigue.

Not that happy with Luna and Scamander, but that's just personal perference.I've always been a fan of Luna and Neville.

I am very keen to read more; keep up the good work.

Koya'cyi

Frontline

good start

So far, I've found several mistakes. I just thought I'd let you know..

1) Rose's middle name is Nymphadora

2) During the Sorting, they call the students last name first, then first name, and they never include their middle names. (eg. Potter, Albus, or Malfoy, Scorpius, or Weasley, Rose)

You also have many spelling and grammar errors. Do you have a beta? If not I'd suggest getting one.

By the way, this is not a flame. :)

Ah! Brotherly love.

Congratulations on completing a fanfic. Well done, you.

Whoa! I do not believe it is fan to have a snake rear and open its mouth!

I think that the sword can only be wielded by a Gryffindor.

Very exciting.

Hm. Interesting.