Why do you insist on him talking out loud for some reason, there’s no reason he can’t say such things internally :/

Ehh if he can’t change anything, or anything he touches turns worse, that makes this whole story pointless as nothing would change, am I right or wrong?

The fluff is real man, the fluff is real!

I don’t agree with him speaking out load talking about different universes, that should have been an internal mental debate then pass out, it’s more realistic, I mean when your panicking do you talk to yourself out loud?

Is he not a shiny blue eyed almost seven foot tall monstrosity of a human being? Because I thought that’s what spartan II look like no? How can a spartan not tell that they are looking at a spartan at first glance? Maybe it’s the fact that this ten year veteran spartan has been knocked out twice in 1 day by regular humans. What kind of ridiculous horseshit is that? Ten years later and he still sounds like a 17 year old but I guess skipping past that in one or two chapters will do that. Garbage story. I’m done

I hate these kinds of starts, nothing changed. The whole point of reading a story like this is the change but we get nothing. Then again what should I expect from an author with such little imagination he just copies someone else’s story.

was there a sequel bc if not I'm going to kill myself right now this is like the best peices of literary alternatives to halo ive ever read I loveeee it

"Kyle, listen, what happened in the gym proved that even with knowledge of what will happen next you can't alter history" said Halsey.

Then what the hell is the point of this story? I'll give it a few more chapters, but if you're just gonna rehash canon, I'm done.

Dropped it here mc is already a fucking dumbass . Noticed he’s in the halo universe and what does he do?

“I can’t believe I’m in the halo universe”
*continues to name off people that he ISNT supposed to know, making it more suspicious *
Smh

That was a vert great story !
It made me cry at the end, I really thought toi were going to definitly kill Kyle !
But thanks for the Happy ending !
(And it would have bien very cool if we get a sequel...).
Best from Britanny !

A sequel would be nice. Loved this fic, absolutely amazing.

Great story man that was really good.

Isn't Sheila 065?

A Spartan II was stopped by a single bullet? Yeah I get it penetrated his SPI but surely it'd take 2 or 3 bullets to stop one completely

Need more cause it’s awesome