Good detailed train of thought for John regarding his feelings and observations of Cameron

cool fic.

I enjoyed this a lot!

This is an amazing little fic. Thank you.

a little confusing at the end but good.

This story is absolutely brilliant. I love it. You did a wonderful job with the emotion and how John's sort of fighting through it all. A clever way of going about it, so kudos to you.

~Missi

Nice one-shot, I like it! But you've some typos, otherwise it was good!

I really enjoyed reading Johns thoughts on everything, we have seen so far!

You did good!

Like the first guy said, aside from a lot of grammar errors, I really liked this. On the museum part, it could've worked to mention how John felt when Morris was quite obviously making a move on Cameron by showing her his music. In that episode John kind of acts fast and says "Hey man, what you got there?" So he was obviously drawing him away from her.

So yeah, good job.

Rating: 7.9

I like the nice little oneshot and taking John's POV from season 1. There was a few grammar mistakes. However, it was still good. The title of the five W's stood out towards the end. I thought it was a nice touch. Keep up the good work but watch the grammar.