Fantastic! Breaking the glasses while kissing was quite funny. I would have loved it if they had kissed in that show. I love your depiction of the episode. Nice job :D.

Loved this!

well written, very detailed, and you got all the requirements in there! *sigh* i wish this happened in the episode!

Laura and Bill are both very believable and in-character (and so was Cottle ;))

great job on this!

Oh. My. Gods. That was awesome.

It was so serious, and just like that, you flipped it to put a smile on my face. :)

Loved it!