awesome, is cam going to be a spy? it would make a good book 2

wow I wish they did that to Blunt earlier
Keep on the writes

I loved this hole story! Cameron was sooo sweet!:D amazing story! Well done:D

loved it

it was only wolf who was there at point blank

I know this is a really awkward question, but it plays a part in making the story more realistic.

Bathroom?

AWESOME!

tad over the top with the whole Blunt thing but hey, it wouldn't be good fiction otherwise!

!HB2

you have a knack for making me cry :')

Except this time I was actually crying, not tears just rolloign over my eyes... Cam is so sweet!

I love Cade's and Bailey's characters!

Grammar:

For the first time the sounds of the little boys' sobs reached snakes' ears and he struggled harder with his bonds, wondering what they had done to the defenceless child... Should be

For the first time the sounds of the little boy's sobs reached snake's ears and he struggled harder with his bonds, wondering what they had done to the defenceless child

and also...

Alexs' name yet again laced through the pleas... should be

Alex's name yet again laced through the pleas

:) Nearly got the hang of it... but i love the chapter!

Yay! Now they know!

:'( I hope the next chapter is less depressing...

Wow... I only got to half way through this chapter and I'm crying! :'(

Ohmygosh i LOVED your story! It was amazingly good

im sad that its finished but it was still awesome )

Lolz Cameron was the cutes kid ever! And hahaha Blunt

deserved it p wow the medic of the unit smoking! Lolz

i love this story, well done!

:)

wow, i love this! it is so going on my favorites list