So, i'am french but i hope that you will understand my review. First of all, i wanted to tell you thank you for your first story and this sequel. I love it and devour it in two days. I love Kai and honestly it's a huge compliment from me who despise most of OC in fiction (because they are mainly too good, too strong and know it all...) Here Kai is so wonderful because he is strong but does have problems and difficulties in his life.

Ino is my favorite female character and it's her who brings me here, to read your wonderful story. I don't love fast romance ( she is beautiful, he is strong, she likes him and he likes her and out of nowhere there are making out while they don't know eachother very well ...No, no, no I hate it) I adore built romance and it's exactly what you have done here. Your story is action with romance and it's great.

I read that it's a three story and you never abandon your story so even if we are in 2018, soon 2019, I look forward to see the final story of Kai's history and his return to Ino

I wish you the best

WhiteBlackGrey

PS: my friends will love for sure your story

Where is the sequel

Can't wait fore the sequel

Awesome story but I'm really mad at you for what you did to ino and Kai but yeah good story

Yes! Another chapter! I really hope you're still writting when you're fifty, beacuse you're really good at it. And sorry for my english, I am actually from Brazil(very far away). Keep up the good work!

Hey! First, im REALLY happy that you wrote a new chapter. I've been waiting since...2009? But, whatever, now you're back! Please stay this time! I love your fic! Kai is awesome, just like all you're characters!

Love this story :)

Woo sequel! \o/

This story is very good. I wish you would update more. Pretty please?

On a side note, I think that you should incorporate some crossovers in your fic, maybe for the next installment. Maybe some Harry Potter, Pokemon, or hey! How about some crossover with the Valdemar stories! Just a thought.

I just gotta say Kai is Kick %$!

...ahem. So, I'll start by telling you my favorite part was Kai and Kyo's conversation at the beginning. "Yep." "Wow..." "Yep." I lol'd :]

Oh boy, Hito's really coming back? Woot. Ffffs, NaruHina makes me gag.

Update faster so I don't have to read the previous chapters to even remember what the heck's going on!

Rasengan-Chidori combo? Yeah, it works. I know you named it Rasengori for the sound of it, but if you called it Rasendori instead it would mean Spiraling Birds as well as sounding cool. I'm just wondering how it would compare to the Fuuton: Rasenshuriken or even just Fuuton: Rasengan in strength. While the wind-based Rasengan is said to damage to the cellular or atomic level, the lightning Rasengan demolished six-seven trees. Are the techniques equal or similar in strength, or is one stronger than the other? And since the potential is there, will there be an upgrade to it like Fuuton: Rasenshuriken is to Fuuton: Rasengan?

Shadow

Wow it took you a while to update your story but it was worth the wait. This chapter was good looks like Kai is taking it easy about Seiru being his father I hope you update soon.

Why am I always the late reviewer, jeez.

'ight. I know I always say this but you did leave a nice ol' hint as to who Seiru was back when he met up with Ushina. I put him in one of my other reviews to see if you were gonna say anytime soon.

Kai seems quite mature compared to the others sometimes now, even though he's going hearbroken teen on us. Yay drama. Sakura also seems to have matured a lot, towards Kai too, seeming to understand him now so well. Or was it Ino she was understanding...ah whatever.

You and your cliffhangers...update whenever v_v

Welcome back and Merry Christmas! This is well done as always. You did well with the talk between Ino and Sakura. I could see what was going on clearly. The action scenes felt less serious than the others, but maybe that was because of the mission elements, aka retrieving Tora. Still, I was expecting it to be a bit more serious. Now Seiru being Kai's father was totally unexpected, but that's understandable since you decided to make him so after you introduced him. I would never have guessed, what with your unpredictable way of weaving more things into the original plan as you go. However, I do suggest that you get up to date with Shippuden before you write further.

Super long is right, my friend. Wish I could say I did as much on my story, but alas, I've been away and my muse has been in deep slumber. My writing style also took a pretty hard hit from an intense formal writing class... it might be a while before I can sort things out again. Even then, it will probably sound nothing like my old and considerably more flexible and comfortable writing style.

Here I wait...

Shadow