Oh my. I haven't review'd this yet? Sorry... I'm really behind on reviewing anything, lately.

Anyway.. Erk and Priscilla. Hehehe I like it. And Pent, too, is epic win.

After seeing all the different pairings used by different people in this contest, I'm so inspired... Hehe.

Congratulations on completing it! There are parts where it sounds rushed, but overall it was very good. Now all you have to do is to keep writing!

WHOO HOO YOU'RE DONE!11one

[Xirysa]

Oh ho ho! Serra, huh? Aww... I thought it was cute.

Serra is made of epic win. Which reminds me... I really want to write her sometime soon... And Lucius, too. He's so cool... Effeminate men are the best! [shot]

Anyway, nice job! Hope to see the last chapter up soon!

[Xirysa]

It's nice that you actually said why she tastes like mint. Sometimes there's no logic. Logic is a wonderfully refreshing thing to see.

Other than that, maybe you used the word taste too often? I noticed it once or twice, but it's not s if the fic's littered with the word, on the other hand. There was a decent amount of variety, anyway, so it's probably not a problem. Anyway, nice next chapter. The next two should be good too.

Aww... That was sweet. Really, it was. Eliwood and Ninian are so cute... XD

A bit rushed, and I don't think that "nightingale" needs to be capitalized, but... Other than that, very nice job indeed.

Only two more to go!

[Xirysa]

Darling. Absolutely darling. Hector and Florina are such a sweet pair. I like how you have Florina so jumpy. Some Hector-Florina fics just have her instantly melt because Hector is there but she's too jumpy for that. Good job. And yes, it was fluffy enough. _ Fluff love. _

~Starlight

Hehe, no that was sweet-I thought it was cute! You write Florina very well, and though Hector doesn't seem like that large, hunkering, brash lout of a lord we all love, he's still very much IC. So... I liked it. C:

Haha, so... Three more to go. Do you have the pairings for this already planned out, or just going along? And I was also curious... If you do have everything planned out, what sense do you think is the hardest?

XD I understand if you want to keep it to yourself and keep us, the readers, in the dark. I'm the same way.

Keep writing, and kudos on another chapter!

[Xirysa]

O_O I heart you so much! Jaffar and Nino are one of my all time favorites... and I love fluff... so this was doubly amazing! _ Squee! Keep going! _

~Starlight

OMG... That was cute.

Wow, this was really well done. It's always good to see a Jaffar & Nino fic, and this one was especially nicely written. I agree with Xirysa. That first line made a good hook; it took control of the reader's attention. Excellent job.

I thought the flashback was particularly good. I remember Jaffar vaguely mentioning that day, but it was never really explained or described any further. I liked the fact that you elaborated on that. And clutching his heart without knowing why was a great added touch.

Overall, awesome job! I look forward to reading the rest!

Adkgahdlfk. O_O

I stumble upon the FE section, and what do I find? YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY.

Srsly.

[Jaffar walked out of his tent into the embrace of his closest friend, the eternal darkness.] Were you reading my mind or something? Because today, I felt that I was on an KH withdrawal and decided to watch some stuff on Youtube. I love you. CX Best first line ever.

...Sight, I think, was the hardest one to write for me personally. But I think that you did a pretty goo job. The only thing I would suggest is trying to push the actual sense through a little more-there were some parts where I didn't know that it was sight. But don't worry, it happened to me too. Quite a bit, actually.

Oh ho ho! Keeping the pairings a secret, are we? Sounds vaguely familiar...

Anyway... Can't believe that someone else is doing the challenge! You have seriously made my day. Kudos, man. Epic kudos.

[Xirysa]