I can't say I didn't see that coming. Even if it will happen in canon. (But damn, if something happen to Rukia, all hell will break lose. Neh, ichi? I'm with you.) Anyway, I like the feeling here. I guess, we're the same. Wanting our otp to convey endless love even of its tragic. Lols. Weird heh? Another anyway, good job! :3 more pls. :)

omg, this was so sad and heartbreaking. i could feel how sad and depressing and painful ichigo is when he see rukia's lifeless body. bravo to you for able to capture the whole antsy scene ichigo is going through in this short one-shop. gosh seeing him burst out crying make me want to cry too. amazing all around!

so sad and really tragic but too hurt. the last question make my throat dry..

T_T so...beautiful

i cant think if this really happen in the actual manga anime...i might just find tite kubo n kill him instantly...still...u r go0d..thx

Very well written! It made me sad T-T...

Good strong emotion! - Great job!

TT_TT awesome. just awesome. i feel like giving you a hug.

This is so good...but I can't handle the angst *sob*

This is one of the only IchiRuki fics to be written in second person as far as I know. Well done.

You should write another story, perhaps from Rukia's P.O.V.