Awwwww that was sweet cause every one had their people they loved and sad that Esme and Carlisle died they were my favorite

yea, adults needs friends too, right?

very good beginning

I'm not crying... my eyes just happen to be sweating lol

Absolutely beautiful I have loved this story it was amazing and so well written, I think the ending was perfect and I couldn't help but shed a tear when I read it, thank you for such a great story

- H

I totally cried! Tears are rolling down my cheeks as we speak! Aw! It was so sweet! I loved it! :')

I can't believe you made me cry that much after just 8 chapters! Such sweet story. Thanks for sharing :)

I. Love. It. Thank you for writing this!

AWWWWWWWWWWWW! I almost cried! Ohmygawd! This is so good! I wish I find my own Carlisle and live a happy Esme-Carlisle life.. *sniff* Gosh, I really love this story! Really. I can't help but LOVE it! It's SO good. I love this, love this, LOVE this!

You made me cry! I wasn't even going to cry until you said 'Please don't cry.' This story was really short and sweet! I love it! The ending was very sad and happy at the same time! Great job!

this made me cry and i dont cry often :'(

Awww . . . Thats so sad! Im happy they're together though!

Beautiful. You're a phenomenal writer. We don't normally get that kind of stories from Twilight authors. Thank you. It's brilliant. And, yes, I did cry. It was a fantastic experience to be able to read this. I'm going to check out you're other stories now. I want to see what else you can do. :)

Very well written. I like the idea of the kids as actual children.

I must say I really like this story, but I haven't had much time to update. I'll go back and review earlier later chapters later ;)

And one thing I noticed that was a mistake.

"Don't chew with your mouth full." I think you meant to say "Don't *talk* with your mouthful."

I hope you don't find me rude for pointing this out, but I just noticed it and thought that you may want to change it for future readers.