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This story could be so good but the grammar is killing it. It's like the books where great but the movies only told half the story the books tell, in the books you can tell Harry likes Ginny early on but in the movies Harry all of a sudden likes Ginny. Me I could tell Harry liked Ginny in PoA, he the started to really like her in OoP in every book whenever she is walking out of a room Harry is always watching her leave like a part of him is walking away too which it turns out is true his other half is leaving. Wish you could come back and fix this but know you never will, only if I could write, I would adopt so many good fic's there is 1000' s of them that are good and only have 2 or 3 chapters

Meet on 3 three days? Is that 9 days or 3 days a week for 3 weeks or 3 days each in 3 months or 3 years? Aw man I'm confused, and offended hope you are happy

Amazing story

What about representatives of the sentient creature/beings in the Forest, like centaurs?

I think you need a proper ending

Albus - for once - is dead-on about Harrod's - even if they don't have a Magical Division, the main location is big (trying to tackle it in one day is like trying to tackle the Pentagon; don't - just *don't*; set aside at least two more days). I have been to Macy's second-largest store (Washington, DC - F Street) and barely managed to *not* get lost; I likely *would* get lost in their largest in the largest store - too many floors with too much square footage (still in New York City). Harrod's is the size of both put together. (Set aside three days - and take along serious walking shoes - you *will* need them.) I am speaking as someone that has covered most of the Pentagon (all seven floors of it - that includes the basement and sub-basement) - it's not the largest office building on the planet for nothing; and yet I am issuing warnings about a department store. (It isn't as if you have not been warned.)

Really appreciate and enjoyed your story thanks

It was so good

Harrods is a monster (merely in Muggle terms) - in fact, Muggles have gotten LOST in there. (Finding out that is has a Magical Division is scarier still.)

Lester Holt? Since when did the host of NBC Nightly News get exported to the UK? Is he THAT underpaid by Comcast that he needed a second job working for the Ministry of Magical Mismanagement?

I hope this does't leak; a house-elf on the Gringott's Board of Directors? (While the goblins aren't the least bit squeamish about it, it would certainly drive a few humans up trees.

The Muggle stocks - all except Virgin Group, plc existed in 1979 (and therefore could have been purchased by the Potters directly or via Gringotts or a Muggle investment bank tied to Gringotts (as far as the latter goes, both Royal Bank of Scotland AND Barclays Bank have links to Gringotts in fanfiction - so either could have done so)). My only correction is the name of he holding company and where it is incorporated; the Group is chartered in the UK; therefore plc is proper; Incorporated is NOT used for a company (holding or otherwise) chartered in the United Kingdom. The Virgin Group does own or have stake in American companies; however, the Group itself is based in the UK.

Cute - block, yes - but Dumbles did NOT put it there. (Therefore - who or what did?)

Lionfire Hall has Vampires on the staff? So much for them being Dark Creatures. (A shame Umbridge got Veiled; I wonder how she would this rather large piece of Untasty News. Vampires on the STAFF of Godric Gryffindor's ancestral home - so no; Harry had nothing to do with hiring them. "But that means - that means - " (exploding Umbridge))