love this! please continue!

Omg please update soon! I really
Love this story️

If the re-write is fun and inspiring to complete the story, go ahead, but it's tons of work, just read over again and add a few things if you must, but the most important thing seems to be IMHO that you complete the tale! :) Love your work!

Honestly, your old writing style isn't that bad. A little convoluted in places, but since I suffer from the same problem (especially in my earlier attempts) I see no reason to quibble over it. I would love to see where this goes. I am curious about Mytho and what is happening to him and I want to see how Ahiru accepts her fate when the time comes to fulfill it.

I've your entire story. Sorry I can't review all of your story.
I have to say this: Your story is awesome! Fakir is cool as a dragon man! I wander what happened to Mytho. I will read the rewrite fic later and review it. Keep write this fic, kay?

So excited! :D

Haha, I think you are good to just continue, but then again, I wouldn't be opposed if you decided to clean up or rewrite the whole thing. I'm curious to see what you decide to change if you go with that option.

First of all, I'm so sososososoosososososososoooooo happy you picked this up again. Write on, favorite author of mine!
So, rewrite or continue.
My personal opinion is that your writing is incredible as it is. I don't really see a need to rewrite it. And I want to see what happens next!
However, if rewriting includes more than just grammar errors and sentence structure, major things like adding/taking away plot points, then yes it would be better to rewrite before continuing. Plot points are obviously crucial to the future chapters, however small. Especially in romantic stories like this one. But, even though I don't have the story board, I'd say the plot is also fine as it is.
In the end it's up to you. If your gut says rewrite, then follow what makes you satisfied. But I really don't see any flaw in your writing, or any need to rewrite what you have. :)

Please continue where you left off its such a beautiful story I would like to see how it ends

Hey there Blu!
Sorry for not being a frequent reviewer(actually, it's been so long that I can't remember whether I have reviewed for you or not), but I some how still have the guts to toss in my two cents.

I know it's rough to look at old writings and not fix them, but I think that, while you are still inspired, it's best to go ahead and finish and save the rewrites for later. This is tough for me to say, since I like to edit as I go along rather than all at once, but as a reader I am more likely to follow new chapters and reread later.

Sorry, I took the unprofessional route, I know. But this is a story that, despite its mistakes, is doing well enough for itself that it can be finished satisfactorily without altering past elements. I'm really eager to see where you are going with this, so I hope you decide to continue first and revise later.

Thanks for the great work!

-Fahiru

It's difficult to say... I only just found this story and I rather liked where it was going. I mean, I guess I just want more! Whether that means a rewrite or just picking up where you left of...

Oo! Oo! I vote to just tweak parts you feel need to be changed, and to continue on! :)

I would recommend a rewrite, if only to check sentences and word choice, since it will make you more in-tune with your story again by combing over every word. More fleshing is not something I'd be against, so just do whatever feels right for the story, you know? Whatever you do, I'll be reading this over from the beginning once you start updating again. I'm so happy to know this story will be continued soon! Take your time and make it awesome! o

I would love either! It'd be cool if you re-wrote it, but to continue off is just as good!

I'M SO EXCITED TO SEE YOU'RE BACK! In all honesty I can go either way. On one hand I'm dying to know what happens next - on the other hand it's been a while since I've read it so I could use a good memory jogger, and what better way than to read a rewrite? Either way I am very much looking forward to updates!

Opps sorry I wasn't logged in as long as it gets finished I'm good