| Reviews for Caught between Cousins |
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   NotoriousNat chapter 11 . 1/23/2013 Omgggggg pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee update soon i love it ! NOTORIOUSNAT XX |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/15/2013 I know you haven't updated in YEARS but I hope you finally remember this story and continue it I really like it |
| Becca chapter 11 . 12/6/2009 I..I..I LOST OF WORDS 2 SAY WHY make me wait then post a short chapter! plz continue soon! I'll CRY if you don't! |
| tyrani13 chapter 11 . 8/20/2009 no u left me hangin no fait lol add more soon |
| CrazzyChilddd chapter 11 . 6/21/2009 Loved The Chapter Update Soon ? Love Megan :) |
| naelacy chapter 11 . 5/27/2009 Okay here's the thing I don't like about this story... How fast johnny and hermione fell "in love." that quickly doesn't happen.. By how it seems, they knew each other for like, a week, and she's already in love and slept with the dude? It's just not realilistic... Other than that, I am enjoying the story.. The fact she's with one but with the title, it seems she is gunna start falling for Draco, that should be very interesting... |
| JasperXRoseXEdward chapter 11 . 2/13/2009 sigh.. i liked this chapter! a lot.. i haven't been able to read it yet because i was banned from the computer for awhile.. lol |
| Just.A.Dreaming.Girl chapter 11 . 2/4/2009 i liked it so far.. please write more asap i wanna know about the letter please please please please ok anyway the chapter LOST EYES shows a new draco, the i can kinda stand a muggle draco any way i liked it ! |
| AthenaGeorge chapter 11 . 1/31/2009 Meanie. |
| mistriss of darkness chapter 11 . 1/29/2009 you! you! you can't do this to me! you make me wait then post a short chapter! plz continue soon! it'll bloody kill me if you don't! |
| alosercanwin chapter 11 . 1/29/2009 great story! i hate cliffhangers so you have to update soon! please :) |
| Amber chapter 1 . 1/29/2009 You need to use grammer, punctuation and a spellcheck. The storyline was cute, but the character hardly sounds like Hermione at all. The way she was acting with her parents, Hermy is a lot more pleasant and witty than you portray her. Also when she's talking about the Olympic swinging, that sounds like a 6 year old, not somebody Hermione's age. I liked when you used italics on "have" and the phrase "I'll have you know", because Hermione talks like that, very emphatic. Also, English people write it Mum not Mom, but no biggy! And lastly, I think that you should give a bit of an ending to the story, perhaps explaining Hermy's feelings about this. Or even just leave it at that, but write a second one involving Hermy stressing over the matter! Good work, overall :) |
| idodigress chapter 10 . 12/23/2008 “Then why in bloody hell would you sleep with him?” “It was our last night; I wanted to make it special!” “Then bake cookies or something, don’t sleep with the guy!” Lol, that bit made me laugh, good chapter!:) PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| mistriss of darkness chapter 10 . 12/15/2008 thanks for finally posting! this was a good chapter! plz continue soon! plz don't reply! |
| JasperXRoseXEdward chapter 10 . 12/14/2008 aw.. th ats so cute of harry but um... wat about draco and hermione? |
