i love this fic so much im risking it all by reading this on a school computer

Seeing as Invader Zim has had a boom in recent times I came back to read one of my favorite old fanfics. And though it shows its age at times, I still believe this to be splendidly well written and capturing the feeling like you’re watching the show. It was always a shame to me that this story didn’t continue, and I hope someday you can muster up the motivation to come back to it.

Would you believe me that I take a few hours to finish the last 5 chapters?
I had done before (all this week I spend two at reading your story I get excited because the plot), a person had recommended your fic and soon find it and read it all
It's a great story and I leave this last update Super intrigued, I love this story and I was very sad to check before you start reading that was discontinued
but still, this is a great story (and I say "is" because, not yet published in the last chapter) but something was discontinued, I guess ...
but it was a great week thanks to this story!
I engache me it just began the first chapter and as I read, my emotion and intrigue were growing more and more, could only wait for the next day to continue and continue reading
They were the best days of my life!
and you can get it and are said but, I would be very happy if you will continue :D
of course, someday
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I realized when leyes shone
great way to add to the story! D

cool

Please continue! PLEASE!

Now that I have stopped being busy and got down to reading this, I will review.

I love Tallests reaction. XD I can totally see them watching soap operas.

Last chapter! .. or not. I hope it's "or not" because this story is AMAZING and I really wish you would continue it. I really like your writing style and I love your OCs and the way you portray the canon characters. You do a fantastic job and I really hope that this story continues someday.

GIR and Juan and Zim and Computer and-*breaks off* SO MUCH EPICNESS! I was laughing SO HARD. Can't wait to see the Tallests!

I am speechless. Surely even ZIM can't be THAT stupid?!

O.O I would hate to be Zim if Mr. Elliot hadn't stopped Gaz ... she freaking scares me.

Who knew GIR had such deep thoughts? XD
Love the Computer. Zim was totally in character, indignant as always.

Hmm. Usually I don't like it when authors switch from the present to the past trying to describe one event, or, similarly, when they switch POVs every few paragraphs, but you pulled it off.

Dun dun dun!
I actually like reading from Louie's perspective. He's a very interesting character.

French butler? Priceless. XD

I loved reading this chapter, both Tak and Louie played their part so well. They were almost flirting in some places, but very calculating and cunning. You wrote it wonderfully. Once again, loved it!

"The Noodle Incident!"

"That was the blond kid with the tiger's fault, and you know it!"

ALL RIGHT NOW YOU HAVE A NINE ON THE AWESOME-O-METER JUST FOR THE CALVIN AND HOBBES REFERENCE.

Glad to see that Juan is actually showing some sense for once, sometimes when I'm reading this I just want to slap him like Mike.